Your comments I would appreciate a lot

[cpot]

Hello, I would like to ask your opinion about my redesigned site. I put some photogalleries on it, you can access them from the first 'home' page.
What I've noticed,the main page downloads a bit slowly and the buttons and other design elements are a bit delayed. Any suggestion to improve the site in this case? The site was created with BV.
The site has 2 language versions: Hungarian: www.fotopot.net and English: http://www.fotopot.net/index_en.html
I'm afraid, my English is not correct, if you'll notice some spelling or vocabulary problems, would you help me to correct them, please?

Thank you for your help.

[HalaalPages]

Re: Your comments I would appreciate a lot

Hi Cecile, your texts are a little hard to read on some parts of your site (I only visited the English version). Here's a suggestion for the English write-up:

Imagine having taken part in an interesting or special event, and you wanted to see yourself in that moment in time for years to come, or share your memories with your friends and family. Memories fade, but with one of my high quality photographs, your memory can live on forever.

Your satisfaction is my utmost concern, and I will work with you to make sure that you are very pleased with your performance and my picture quality. I am eager to improve both my skills and my technical equipments to be able to catch your best moments, giving you great photos for lasting memories.

Or something like that.

[cpot]

Re: Your comments I would appreciate a lot

Thank you HalaalPages for your help, I think I'll use your suggested text, I like it very much.
Thanks again.

[davidundalicia]

Re: Your comments I would appreciate a lot

technical equipment - drop the s

[goldpaw]

Re: Your comments I would appreciate a lot

I really like the way you have it layed out. It does not fit the ordinary.
Good Job! (I am referring to your header page, nice!)
Good Luck with your site!

[cpot]

Re: Your comments I would appreciate a lot

Thanks all of you.

[neil1980]

Re: Your comments I would appreciate a lot

Nice job!
The one thing i would say is that it is a bit annoying as all your links and buttons open in a new window.

Well done

[cpot]

Re: Your comments I would appreciate a lot

You may be right, neil1980, I'll think it over. Thanks.