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  • prisciread
    Private First Class

    • Dec 2007
    • 7

    site in progress

    Hi,

    If anyone would like to comment on this site, thank you for your effort.

    Regards,

    letusreadtogether.com
  • Marincky
    General

    • Apr 2006
    • 4539

    #2
    Re: site in progress

    Don't know from the home page what the website is about

    Took me 7 minutes to spot your navigation bar

    Still don't know what your website is about having found the navigation and visiting every page of your site.
    Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

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    • Collectors-info
      General

      • Feb 2006
      • 8703

      #3
      Re: site in progress

      Hi, although much of the wording is perfectly understandable. The grammar used in some areas could do with some correction. IE:
      Many speakers of other languages
      Might sound better as?
      Many people that have the ability to speak other languages.
      The word "Speakers" is usually a reference to someone from a small group that would be talking to an larger audience in possibly a conference of some type.

      patient.
      Regards Chris.

      Collectables, Collecting, collectors-info.com

      www.chrismorris.co.uk

      House build project

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      • nzbr
        Lieutenant Colonel

        • Dec 2006
        • 546

        #4
        Re: site in progress

        Hi,
        Your menu bar should be more visible (bigger fonts maybe) and the orange you are using is hard on the eyes. keep it up!

        Cheers,
        N Z B R
        t o u r s
        New Zealand Tours
        Excursiones en Nueva Zelanda
        Nova Zelandia Pacotes e Roteiros
        Nouvelle Zelande Voyage
        Neuseeland Reisen

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        • prisciread
          Private First Class

          • Dec 2007
          • 7

          #5
          Re: site in progress

          Hi,
          Thanks for the comments. They were very helpful.
          Regards,
          letusreadtogether.com

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          • SAman
            Major General

            • Mar 2007
            • 2009

            #6
            Re: site in progress

            I found your top banner a little disconnected. the two different texts and one on the blue back ground. It just looks a little thrown together.
            You might want to put some lines between your nav buttons, or a background behind each one, to make them stand out a bit better.
            good start, keep gong.
            Mike

            Any excuse for non performance only weakens the charactor

            In God We Trust

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            • narobe
              First Lieutenant

              • Apr 2006
              • 182

              #7
              Re: site in progress

              There are some excellent reviews about colours for web pages, I would recommend you a google search :), I'm colour blind so perhaps I'm not the best person to talk about colours but I do find your colours just a bit to bright.
              As Chris quotes "the grammar used in some areas could do with some correction", you cant start a sentence, "That there are". There are would be better.

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