please check my site

[pete987]

Hi, could you see if I have done things properly, www.grimebusters.biz

[Andy128]

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Nice colors. Clean and simple. A+ for design.

Search Enging Optimization. Grade of C.
Keywords- Cleaning appears way to many times. Many of the keywords cannot be found in the content of the page.
Description- Good.
Title- How about Grimebusters Proffessional Cleaning Service

Bethers has a great pdf booklet explaining Search engine optimization. Look for a post by her and check out her book. It will really help you get ranked in the search engines.

Cheers-
Keith

[pete987]

Re: please check my site

Great, will work on the keywords. Was not sure what affect the same words would have,
thanks, Pete

[SAman]

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You have a good start, now the tweaking begins.
you need to read and reread your text. on the home page in the last 2 paragraphs,
With uniformed a highly trained staff Grimebusters are is becoming the first choice for a trusted and reliable cleaning service provider.

Our domestic cleaning team provides a daily and weekly service covering all aspects, with the same commitment and quality.

on your about us you have some more like that.

Good luck!!!

[D'son]

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The links to Domestic cleaning do not work, and your banner/header/logo and buttons are not in the same place on every page they dance around from page to page. Nice site so far.

[pete987]

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Quite a bit of advice here. Not something a beginner really notices. It is really useful having the help. Will try to correct it, many thanks, Pete

[Tom Finley]

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Just a couple of nitpickers:

1. Your home page is just a hair too long for my screen, making me scroll down to get your phone and other info. You could fit this whole page on one screen easily by inching the three photos up closer to each other and then widening the column of copy ("We provide Surrey..."). That way, the page would be shortened and it would all fit on most viewers' screens with no need to scroll.

2. On the About Us page I would add a word to the second paragraph to make it "Although the original company was successful..."

[Collectors-info]

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Hi, site looks fine. But personally i would add a bit more description on what your services include.
Might also be worth mentioning if you have any green credentials in the cleaning agents being used. Lot of company’s like to add this to there CV’s.
On the services.html page, it might be worth adding some detail/description to the list of services you offer, as the SE,s might think of it as just a spam list. Also on the same page you will need key words & a page maybe a title more like “Cleaning , sanitizing services”. Services alone can relate to any of the industries.

Good luck.

[pete987]

New site

Hi, I think I have done the things suggested before. Can I have views again please, thanks, Pete. www.grimebusters.biz

[Collectors-info]

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Hi, you should only open one thread for the testing ground. Otherwise it will get very confusing with repeat comments.

[pete987]

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Sorry, didnt quite understand threads I thought the other thread was finished, Pete

[SChajin]

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Looks fine Pete, but what is the little seek button on there for?

[Tom Finley]

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hee, hee--that's actually a low wall!

[SChajin]

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Really???? Your kidding Right ???? Ha Ha

[D'son]

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On your services page you have a list (grey text) and arrows all greyed out except for the last one which is green. I makes me want to click on them like they are links (because it appears that the last one is active) or that that is the only service of the list that you offer. I think they should all be the same, green. And your page widths vary from page to page, some no side scroll, some with. I would have them all the same.