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  • D'son
    Major General

    • Apr 2008
    • 2577

    Latest site for review (prototype)

    Hi everyone, take a look at the latest web site I am building for my brother. He will be hosting on VH as soon as he gets me the rest of the info I need, as well as originals of the pictures (these are some he had on his other web site and they are not sized correctly, poor quality and have cheesy frames). But you can give me input on the layout and such. Thanks

    Reguards
    Ed
    www.dsondesigns.com
    www.marseillesyouthsports.com
    www.300hitter.com
    www.bigjk.net
    How to add JAlbum to your site
  • davidundalicia
    General

    • Mar 2006
    • 6294

    #2
    Re: Latest site for review (prototype)

    Good choice of colours - well laid out - captivating content.

    Should do well.....................well done Ed.
    Have fun
    Regards..... David

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    • SChajin
      Major General

      • Jan 2006
      • 2792

      #3
      Re: Latest site for review (prototype)

      Hi Ed, Looks great...Good Job!!
      Sharon Chajin

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      • D'son
        Major General

        • Apr 2008
        • 2577

        #4
        Re: Latest site for review (prototype)

        Thanks David and Sharon.
        Reguards
        Ed
        www.dsondesigns.com
        www.marseillesyouthsports.com
        www.300hitter.com
        www.bigjk.net
        How to add JAlbum to your site

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        • DarrenC
          Brigadier General

          • Jul 2008
          • 1750

          #5
          Re: Latest site for review (prototype)

          Hello Ed

          On the home page the word photagraphy under LPM doesn't look too good, neither does 'capturing lifes precious moments' but I can see you havn't repeated this on the 'prices', 'contact' and 'link' pages which looks better although the word 'photography' (under LPM) needs shifting to the left or made smaller.

          Portraits look great, but rather than have this page open in a new window, why not use an i-frame.

          All the best

          Darren
          Happy Building

          DarrenC

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          • D'son
            Major General

            • Apr 2008
            • 2577

            #6
            Re: Latest site for review (prototype)

            Thanks Darren, I will check the text. What browser are you using? and I thought about the I-frame, still may. Thanks
            Reguards
            Ed
            www.dsondesigns.com
            www.marseillesyouthsports.com
            www.300hitter.com
            www.bigjk.net
            How to add JAlbum to your site

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            • Andy128
              Major General

              • Dec 2005
              • 2317

              #7
              Re: Latest site for review (prototype)

              Looks good. I'd echo the same as above.

              Cheers-

              Andy
              PHP- is a blast!

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              • Marincky
                General

                • Apr 2006
                • 4539

                #8
                Re: Latest site for review (prototype)

                Yep..shift 'Photography' under the logo over to the left or make smaller as Darren says.. otherwise nice work.

                Your brother also takes some very good portraits.
                Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

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                • SAman
                  Major General

                  • Mar 2007
                  • 2009

                  #9
                  Re: Latest site for review (prototype)

                  Ed,,,,,,,,
                  I used FF to look, the Y in Photography is behind the banner Capturing Precious Moments. What Darren said about the words not looking good, I think it's the font or some thing, they look like they were done in a small font and then stretched so they are pixelated..
                  Your nav links on the left,,,,,,If you line up the second and fourth ones then it might look better, they look a little off, unless you ment for them to be in a straight line, then they are way off.
                  On the links page the link name is right up under the title, you might want to move it a couple of spaces down.
                  The pics are great, it opened another page in my browser, some people don't like extra windows opening, because they already have toooooo many open.
                  Looks very good and will be a great site..........................
                  Mike

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                  In God We Trust

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                  • D'son
                    Major General

                    • Apr 2008
                    • 2577

                    #10
                    Re: Latest site for review (prototype)

                    Thanks all I will check out those issues, as for the text it is an exotic style, I tried to make it a gif but for some reason it messed up yesturday (on-line) so I converted it back. As for the photos opening in another window it is because those are not the photos we will be using he is sending me the originals so there won't be those cheesy frames and I can size them all the same. Then I plan on having them open in an I-Frame within the site. Thanks All
                    Reguards
                    Ed
                    www.dsondesigns.com
                    www.marseillesyouthsports.com
                    www.300hitter.com
                    www.bigjk.net
                    How to add JAlbum to your site

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                    • shadow0000
                      Private

                      • Feb 2009
                      • 1

                      #11
                      Re: Latest site for review (prototype)

                      About your site well that is beautiful one, you have a good taste to chose a well balance color of your site and the content much interesting...



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                      • Collectors-info
                        General

                        • Feb 2006
                        • 8703

                        #12
                        Re: Latest site for review (prototype)

                        Hi, looking good!
                        To me it feels like it could be compacted a little more. IE: there is a lot of space. (But this is just personal choice)
                        Would personally loose the VH banners for something like a text link. The Orange matches, but the rest is not very complimentary at all.
                        Would look at getting a link from the jalbum back to the main site. Was feeling a bit lost once this area was entered.

                        Good luck.
                        Regards Chris.

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                        www.chrismorris.co.uk

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                        • Karen Mac
                          General

                          • Apr 2006
                          • 8332

                          #13
                          Re: Latest site for review (prototype)

                          Hmmm... thats not a WEBSITE.. thats just a webpage on your site!!!

                          Thats why i stay out of here. ALL these PAID designers up for website reviews with only a TEST PAGE...

                          and we wonder why the noobs do it

                          Karen

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