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  • mrabcakajoe
    Private First Class

    • Feb 2009
    • 5

    First website

    I would appreciate if you would review my first site. It opens with a flash template that I purchased and edited with Flash Mx. All the rest was done with blue voda


    Thanks
  • PlayItByBeer
    Lieutenant Colonel

    • Mar 2007
    • 653

    #2
    Re: First website

    First of many I'm sure...
    Couple of points:
    • The link from landing page or flash page should have it's 'target' set to self, as it's openning as a second page.

    • Audio on front page OK, but gets a bit much on other pages as well.
    • Have a look at titling your pages correctly (keywords etc)
    • Consider carrying the blue theme of front page through rest of site.

    Cheers,
    Andrew

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    • Collectors-info
      General

      • Feb 2006
      • 8703

      #3
      Re: First website

      Hi, ditto with loosing the music. Your opening page needs some ajustments to make it centre of the page.
      Regards Chris.

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      • mrabcakajoe
        Private First Class

        • Feb 2009
        • 5

        #4
        Re: First website

        Andrew and Chris I appreciate the info thanks for the input, I changed the pages backgound to match and attempted to center the index page.

        mrabcakajoe

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        • tmvijai
          Sergeant Major

          • Apr 2008
          • 88

          #5
          Re: First website

          A decent effort for the first time. I still see the flash image is not centered. It might need to cropped on the left side. Also the menu's black & blue doesn't really play out well. when its select, its black with blue background is not really visible. May be you need to select a lighter color..
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          • mrabcakajoe
            Private First Class

            • Feb 2009
            • 5

            #6
            Re: First website

            Tmvijai I appreciate your input I am using I.E. and FF and the flash is centered in both , I logged on from a different computer and it was not. I attempted to try and change the menu colors and am trying different colors.
            Thanks for your time in posting a review

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            • rickthefox
              Staff Sergeant

              • Jan 2009
              • 45

              #7
              Re: First website

              It looks good. One thing that I want to add about the music is try and see if you can get a code for those built-in players. I am leary about websites that always asks me to run active x control and so most of the time I don't allow them to run active x and everything doesn't load at all. Just an idea.

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              • Greyfox
                Corporal

                • Aug 2008
                • 14

                #8
                Re: First website

                Good effort. Same comment as above with nav tab colours. Red & white on main page works ok, but other pages still have black/blue colour, very hard to read. Just a suggestion, you have link pages under contact tab, might be more visible if Links had it own tab.
                Cheers

                Greyfox


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                • mrabcakajoe
                  Private First Class

                  • Feb 2009
                  • 5

                  #9
                  Re: First website

                  Greyfox, I changed the other tabs to red /white and for the life of me I wish I could figure out how to adjust my drop down menu any hints?
                  Thanks for your time
                  Joe

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