seduction website review

[Jay K]

I started this new dating and seduction website not so long ago and it still needs alot of improvements. I had a friend do all of the writing but it still needs prove-reading because of the grammer mistakes ect. Is there site online that can correct grammer mistakes and make the writing more professional?

Let us know what you think.

http://kamalifestyles.com

[Jay K]

Re: seduction website review

So guys would be great if you can give some feedback on my site, would like to know where i need to make improvements, ect.

Thanks