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  • wisegal
    Private

    • Aug 2008
    • 4

    Please review my first site

    Hi everyone

    Could someone take a look at my site. I think I have a publishing problem and I don't know how to fix it. Other suggestions are also welcomed.

    Thanking you in advance
    wisegal

  • Sunchaser
    First Lieutenant

    • Nov 2007
    • 199

    #2
    Re: First site and I have some problems

    Hi wisegal

    All looks good. I'm not sure what kind of publishing problems you've having?

    I would change your site's menu to include links to all your pages. (best to put the sitemap in a link at the bottom of your pages, rather than as a main menu link.)
    Currently, the only way to get to your other pages is through your sitemap - and this is not the usual menu structure at all.

    I would have your 'Home' link go to http://www.wisebusinessreviews.com/ rather than http://www.wisebusinessreviews.com/index.html

    And put in links in your main menu to all your other pages - http://www.wisebusinessreviews.com/profit-lance.html etc

    So, instead of:

    Home
    Sitemap
    Contact Us

    I would have:

    Home
    Profit Lance
    Keyword Elie
    SEO Elite
    Marketing newbie

    The 'Contact' link could go here as well, or at the bottom of your pages. Personal choice.

    The pages all need centering as well.

    Goodluck :)

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    • wisegal
      Private

      • Aug 2008
      • 4

      #3
      Re: Please review my first site

      Hi Sunchaser

      Thanks for the advice and i guess it is only at my location that the profit lance logo says site map.
      Great name by the way (sunchaser)

      Have a great day
      wisegal

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      • myjaydee
        First Sergeant

        • Sep 2008
        • 71

        #4
        Re: Please review my first site

        I'm looking at your site in Firefox. It's a really good idea to download different browsers to have a look at what other people will see. Firefox expands text directly. Your profit lance full review link is obscured by the text above it. What I would suggest to keep everything nice and tidy is to use a table. Create a new row for each section, ie one for every title, one every body and one for every link, leaving a blank row to seperate the sections. Hope that helps. Good luck with it

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