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  • mark6110
    Major

    • May 2006
    • 261

    #16
    Re: Which page is Best

    Amazing graphics and not that slow for me. (wifi 56kbs) great choice!
    MARK6110

    www.lorissecrets.co.uk
    Mobile Hair & Beauty Treatments, Costa del Sol, Spain
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    Bridal hair and make-up service, Costa del Sol, Spain

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    • jarndt2552
      Private First Class

      • Jul 2008
      • 8

      #17
      Re: Which page is Best

      Awesome! I like the 2nd link the best. The 1st link is great too but appears a little on the girl side.

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      • SChajin
        Major General

        • Jan 2006
        • 2792

        #18
        Re: Which page is Best

        Thanks to everyone who had a hand in helping me..Now go read the book and have you kids add to it!
        Sharon Chajin

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        • enterprice
          Special Status

          • Apr 2009
          • 34

          #19
          Re: Which page is Best

          #3 loading really good!

          BUT - do you think if should be better to make your "ENTRANCE" button a little bit more visible (I was looking for it really hard on the page)
          best regards

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          • Faeini
            First Lieutenant

            • Apr 2009
            • 165

            #20
            Re: Which page is Best

            glad to be able to help! :)
            www.digitalenchant.com

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            • Hylith
              First Lieutenant

              • Feb 2009
              • 169

              #21
              Re: Which page is Best

              It doesn't load too slow for me, it's a little slow, but not annoyingly slow =P
              Best Regards,

              Robert A. Kerr

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              • Muzza
                Captain

                • Aug 2008
                • 200

                #22
                Re: Which page is Best

                Cool, love the idea. I cannot see much difference apart from story.html has the book jiggling up an down a little bit as you turn the pages.

                A couple of suggestions:

                - the image on the homepage should be click-able to start the story. When I first went into story3.html I could not find the "enter" button because it was off the page and I had to scroll down to find it.

                - For the same reason, I think the "next" and "back" keys would be better placed in a more prominent place if possible as they are often down the page too far (a left and right arrow might be more in character than words as well)

                Lastly.... "To Be Continuted" and "Queen Continuted" it might pay to checked your spelling
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                www.NewZealandFishingCharter.com
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