Which page is Best

[SChajin]

I'm bring back "The Everlasting Story" and have tons to do..But your thoughts are always needed. This is written for kids by kids.

http://www.fastlincs.com/the-everlasting-story3.html

http://www.fastlincs.com/the-everlasting-story.html

[Hylith]

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Hello Sharon,

Second one for SURE! I loved it, but loads a little slow. Your title reminds me of the never ending story. But 2nd one really stood out for me. =)

[SChajin]

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I like that 1 too.
Thanks

[mark6110]

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Hi Sharon,
I love both, the second opens faster and that may influence some choices.
I love the idea, and hope that lots of kids learn to use their imaginations in new ways as a result of exposure to it!
There can be no surer way of instilling a love of reading & writing within them, than getting them involved in the processes early.
Bravo,

[SChajin]

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Thanks Mark, maybe somehow I can fix it..Any One Ideas?

[mark6110]

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I have had another look and on balance No. 2 is better graphically.
As for speeding it up, one of our many experts will need to have a look. But once it has downloaded it reloads very quickly.
If it is for kids, I think they will wait just to see what unfolds. The slow download may actually prove to be a positive, in the end?

[SChajin]

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Ha Ha Love your thinking!

[SChajin]

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I added another 1

http://www.fastlincs.com/the-everlasting-story23.html

[Faeini]

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Rohi has really good work , he has a gallery on one of the stores i shop at for my 3d stuff :) (dont take me as a jerk) just hope you got his permission to use it if you do use it :).

[SChajin]

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yep, it was free..So which one?

[Faeini]

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i have to say rohi's , it just makes you think of a fairy tale and it has the falls/water is ever lasting or least makes you think of ever lasting :)
first one i dont like the text kind of fades in the picture coz it has to much color going on , 2nd one is nice , it looks from the image a fight evil vs good type deal.

[SChajin]

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Thanks...Let me know if you need a link..

[Hylith]

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I go with the Rohi's one now too. That's amazing fantasy art.

[nzbr]

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Both are loading really slow.
To fix it would be my priority as people are not really patient...
Keep up with the good work!
Cheers,

[SChajin]

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I'm using this 1..Really slow to load? For me it is pretty quick!

http://www.fastlincs.com/the-everlasting-story.html