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  • sina
    Corporal

    • Feb 2009
    • 11
    #1

    My first web site - reviews appreciated

    This is my very first web site, would appreciate comments regarding content, spelling, colour etc., or any suggestion for improvements, and thankyou to Blue Voda for making it possible for an amatuer such as myself to build my own site. http://www.herbzthatheal.com

    Sina
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  • mark6110
    Major

    • May 2006
    • 261
    #2
    Re: My first web site - reviews appreciated

    Hi Sina,
    Great site and you have done a great job of putting it together.
    I have just 2 points;
    1, your products & uses link from your resources2.html page is not working
    2. Your contact me button opens my outlook page and lets me see your email address. This is never a good idea, as it will attract spam. Try using a form made in BV forms or get advanced blue voda form processor, if you have difficulty with it, Navaldesign can upload it and do your form for a small fee. I have had it done and it works perfectly.
    I hope this is of some use to you.
    Well done, regards,
    MARK6110

    www.lorissecrets.co.uk
    Mobile Hair & Beauty Treatments, Costa del Sol, Spain
    www.princess-bride.co.uk
    Bridal hair and make-up service, Costa del Sol, Spain

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    • Faeini
      First Lieutenant

      • Apr 2009
      • 165
      #3
      Re: My first web site - reviews appreciated

      hmm Home remedies opens up in another windo and i think the yellow background could be tone to a more warmer color but thats just my option also your template moves alot through out the pages.
      www.digitalenchant.com

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      • Stilts
        Private First Class

        • Apr 2009
        • 6
        #4
        Re: My first web site - reviews appreciated

        I like the content of your site...I may be visiting it soon. The yellow was a little hard on the eyes wehn it first opens up but that is all that I noticed that I would change.

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        • ahimsa
          Major General

          • Jan 2009
          • 2184
          #5
          Re: My first web site - reviews appreciated

          Hi Sina,
          not enough time to go through everything but immediately noticeable is the side-scroll:
          Home: not much
          Products, Shipping, Order: none
          BUT...Home Remedies: really big!! & opens in a new window??
          david
          PS -the yellow is OK for me & traditional colour of China LOL
          Never measure the height of the mountain you're climbing. At the summit, look back and see how small it really is!

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          • Sunchaser
            First Lieutenant

            • Nov 2007
            • 199
            #6
            Re: My first web site - reviews appreciated

            Hi Sina

            Nice site!

            As others above have said, softening the yellow would be a good idea.

            Your pop-up pages were opening in narrow windows and I couldn't see the whole page.

            Your information on your homepage all sounded good and in general your site looks good.

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