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  • Alphatech
    Master Sergeant

    • Jun 2009
    • 65

    My First Site

    I have really enjoyed learning to do this although my head continues to spin with so much info. Have a look at my site and pages and let me know your thoughts please. www.airpurificationforhome.com

    Have a Blessed day

    Pat
  • Hylith
    First Lieutenant

    • Feb 2009
    • 169

    #2
    Re: My First Site

    Hello Pat,

    For your first site, you did very well. I can tell you really explored the options with making your first website, because all your pages look different. This isnt really a bad thing but it does make me feel like I am visiting totally new sites when I click your navigational buttons.

    Some pages are centered but then some aren't, might be best to try and keep it consecutive. The bouncing text on the home page is a little annoying.

    Overall, I think your first site is a success, just needs to be fine tuned =)
    Best Regards,

    Robert A. Kerr

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    • newbie
      Sergeant First Class

      • Feb 2009
      • 54

      #3
      Re: My First Site

      Hi Pat,

      I like your site but I would (personallly) prefer it if you swapped the blue voda buttons to match your other buttons (unless you're aiming to promote Blue Voda, which I have nothing against!)

      Well done though!

      Newbie
      www.startgettingpregnant.com

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      • indytnt
        First Sergeant

        • Jun 2009
        • 77

        #4
        Re: My First Site

        The site lacks consistency.
        • Each page is different
        • The tabs are different on each page
        • The pages are not designed with the same layout
        • Select a couple of letter colors and use them consistently.

        The mountain picture seems to be stretched a little too much; it’s becoming blurred. That should probably be reduced to *****en it up. I like the suggestion of clean mountain air; you should carry that theme throughout the site.

        Since this is your first site, you are trying to get all of the format styles you like all onto one site. Pick a single theme and carry it through. You will be creating other sites; so use the other design concepts on those.
        Sincerely,
        Tim & Sonia Platt
        Indianpolis Tour & Travel
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        http://www.tourofindianapolis.info/index.html
        http://www.ezhoneymoon.com/index.html
        http://www.indy-travel.com/index.html
        http://www.indy-tour.info/index.html

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        • Padiwak
          Sergeant Major

          • Jun 2007
          • 87

          #5
          Re: My First Site

          HAve to agree about lack of consistancy however just get your navigation and background consistant throughout the site and it will look great.

          Good luck with the design

          Regards
          DaveK
          Dave K

          www.irishhorsemarkets.com
          www.ecklandssportshorses.com

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