Need some public opinion!

[Bevy2727]

Please check on the site I've been working on. I could really use some feedback.

http://www.bevhattaway.com

[millie]

Re: Need some public opinion!

hi bev

good ads, good contents. personally (please take this as constructive), I would have expected a more professional and arty looking site. The word 'Art' somehow draws attention to the not so professionally presented paper coming out of the typewriter. the white space i think is too much.

[nzbr]

Re: Need some public opinion!

Hi there,
Your site has more adds than anything else!
It would be a good idea to introduce yourself on the main page and tell people what's your site it's all about.

Cheers,

[wysiwyg4]

Re: Need some public opinion!

I agree with NZBR.

Have the index file - your home page - explain for the users
what your business is about and that will, in turn,
give the search engines something to work on.

Like they say, good content is always good.

Other than that, looks great.

I didn't know Google will let you have 6 ads on the same page.
Obviously, I was wrong.

Some folks would say that AdSense is more effective with
just one instance on a page.

Shafi