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  • johnwill
    Corporal

    • Jul 2009
    • 18

    Finished(i Think). Have A Look

    Hi Guys I Think i am finished, on some computers it is a bit slow to load up,but i resized the pictures and changed the page size and it is still slow, but have a look and see what you think
    www.ashbourneenergy.ie

    John
  • ahimsa
    Major General

    • Jan 2009
    • 2184

    #2
    Re: Finished(i Think). Have A Look

    Hi John,
    loading the first page wasn't sooo long :) - no longer than mine takes until it's cached LOL
    I found the following for your attention:

    Home: Having worked in Germany, London, The U.S and all around Ireland we have gained a wide dept of knowledge, and so dealing with the Public, Architect, Engineers and tradesmen is no problem - just doesn't flow right for me. I'd prefer something like: "Having completed a variety of different projects in the US, UK & Germany, we are experienced in working with the general public, Architects, Engineers & construction workers."

    About:
    Ashbourne Energy only uses Webber products and is certified

    Product:
    Insulate your attic
    through a building's fabric
    This is the same procedure as a BER but we demonstrate where your house at and then if certain changes were made, you can see what your final rating would be - sorry, but what does this mean? :)

    Contact:
    Serves Required - maybe, Service Required ??

    Otherwise, pretty good, I'd say....
    david
    Never measure the height of the mountain you're climbing. At the summit, look back and see how small it really is!

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    • wysiwyg4
      Major

      • Nov 2007
      • 477

      #3
      Re: Finished(i Think). Have A Look

      I agree with ahimsa

      1. In that statement and also in the menu, if you could add links to where and what projects you have worked on. You know! Something to back up the statement with.
      2. Your images move a lot between pages.
      3. Home opens in a new window.
      4. In all titles, especially About us, Contacts and others, be specific about the title. For example, About Ashbourne technology, Contact Ashbourne technology, etc. There are millions and billions About Us pages.
      5. Make titles unique to all pages. Be descriptive in titles. But not too long.

      Other than that, looks great.
      Doable Personal Finance

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      • johnwill
        Corporal

        • Jul 2009
        • 18

        #4
        Re: Finished(i Think). Have A Look

        Hi Guys , Thanks alot for taking the time to look at my site, and everything you say is correct, so i will make changes, once again thanks ,
        John

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        • travlinman
          Major

          • Feb 2009
          • 443

          #5
          Re: Finished(i Think). Have A Look

          Finished?

          Hi John, you are never finished....the moment you are, it starts all over again. Learning something new, a update, a small change, an idea, etc...

          I will not even bother to review your site because I have seen that David (ahimsa) has already done so, and in my opinion there is nobody better in this forum at doing so. He has a nose like a Bloodhound for going through a site and finding what there is to find.

          Good Luck

          Travlinman

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          • Collectors-info
            General

            • Feb 2006
            • 8703

            #6
            Re: Finished(i Think). Have A Look

            would personally look at another background image, or make it up in a different way. Your image is at around 800kb & is slow for 1st time visitors on loading. The only thing! is the image is distorted & wouldn't take any more kb reduction in a png format, But converting from png to jpg will help a lot.
            Regards Chris.

            Collectables, Collecting, collectors-info.com

            www.chrismorris.co.uk

            House build project

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            • johnwill
              Corporal

              • Jul 2009
              • 18

              #7
              Re: Finished(i Think). Have A Look

              Hi Chris, Thanks for having a look at my site, i take on board what you say but i am not sure how to go about it, any advice would be helpful. At the moment the background image is taken from my letterhead and is a pdf file so not sure if i can change it
              John

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              • Collectors-info
                General

                • Feb 2006
                • 8703

                #8
                Re: Finished(i Think). Have A Look

                If you get a moment send us your original images that you made the letter with & i will have a look. LINK
                Regards Chris.

                Collectables, Collecting, collectors-info.com

                www.chrismorris.co.uk

                House build project

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                • -m3-
                  Private

                  • Jul 2009
                  • 3

                  #9
                  Re: Finished(i Think). Have A Look

                  Seeing as everybody seems to have already covered the content and quite a lot of the actual coding, the only thing that bothers me when I briefly checked the page is that the menu images are rollovers, but the rollover image isn't preloaded. Google a javascript script that will preload the images (first time visitors won't wait for the image to load before changing). Other than that you seem to have a few errors in your page, which might be useful to fix, but they don't seem to be critical:

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                  • wysiwyg4
                    Major

                    • Nov 2007
                    • 477

                    #10
                    Re: Finished(i Think). Have A Look

                    1. If you click on Home, it opens up in a new window.
                    So I have two instances of that page on my screen.

                    2. Your images move from one page to another.

                    3. Menu is not always at the same place on all pages.
                    Doable Personal Finance

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                    • Collectors-info
                      General

                      • Feb 2006
                      • 8703

                      #11
                      Re: Finished(i Think). Have A Look

                      You have mail! Link to some samples at 67/50/43/kb But cant really improve the quality with a pdf original. But still a bit better than 800kb.

                      Cheers.
                      Regards Chris.

                      Collectables, Collecting, collectors-info.com

                      www.chrismorris.co.uk

                      House build project

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                      • danielsf
                        Private

                        • Jul 2009
                        • 4

                        #12
                        Re: Finished(i Think). Have A Look

                        Your site is interesting

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                        • johnwill
                          Corporal

                          • Jul 2009
                          • 18

                          #13
                          Re: Finished(i Think). Have A Look

                          Hi All, Just like to thank you all for all your help, and especally to Chris for all he done for me.
                          John

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                          • Collectors-info
                            General

                            • Feb 2006
                            • 8703

                            #14
                            Re: Finished(i Think). Have A Look

                            Originally posted by johnwill View Post
                            Hi All, Just like to thank you all for all your help, and especally to Chris for all he done for me.
                            John
                            Good luck with the site.
                            Regards Chris.

                            Collectables, Collecting, collectors-info.com

                            www.chrismorris.co.uk

                            House build project

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                            • hairs.pam
                              Master Sergeant

                              • Nov 2008
                              • 68

                              #15
                              Re: Finished(i Think). Have A Look

                              Hi On your products page the before and after images dont seem to load when i click them,
                              Good Site best of luck
                              Pam
                              Were not there yet but were getting there!!!
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