what do you think?

[Telstar]

Check it out please: http://bigmoneyprofit.com/

Thanks :)

[Vasili]

Re: what do you think?

Maybe a bit too simplified to create any conversion. People want to have enough good information to base a decision upon, or to evaluate the credibility of the offer itself. It's just human nature, and any real 'Selling Strategy' must be firmly rooted in making human nature work to a specific advantage!

This site (version) doesn't meet any minimal expectations at all, and is awkwardly written as well (does not lend to demonstrating success). You need to re-think and refine your USP (Unique Selling Process), IMO .... and should avoid modeling after the "packaged money-makers" that proliferate the web.