Looking for private critique(s) of my website

[tommyb]

Hi everybody, I have been working hard on my website which is not anywhere near finished but I believe I have made a good start.

I am looking for a couple of critiques, criticisms, reviews, tips, etc. of my so far finished (almost) pages (may not be your niche of choice or expertise but that shouldn't matter).

I have not yet added page title on top or any tags because I am looking for your best advice.

Also, any advice on how to name pages when saving in BV ie. page_name OR should it be page-name.

One more thing, this may be a newbie question, but how do you have your page show up in the URL bar as www.mysitename.com/page, instead of www.mysitename.com/page.php.

PM me for the website(s) address. The more the better!

Thanks,

Tom

[ahimsa]

Re: Looking for private critique(s) of my website

....a link to YOUR site would help anyone wishing to review it :)

[Collectors-info]

Re: Looking for private critique(s) of my website

Would need a link for this one! Ah! ahimsa got here 1st

[Karen Mac]

Re: Looking for private critique(s) of my website

You also cannot make it show up as yoursitename.com/page in the url .. it will require the extension. whats more important are the TITLE and the page name itself.

Karen

[tommyb]

Re: Looking for private critique(s) of my website

O i forgot to mention I didnt want to post my link, anyone willing to look at my site can you please private message me or send email to

tommyb1278@
hotmail

Thanks :)

[Marincky]

Re: Looking for private critique(s) of my website

We don't do Private requests!!! Either show the link on here and we will review or do not ask.

[Marincky]

Re: Looking for private critique(s) of my website

Forgot to add.... If you insist on a private critique of your website please email one of Voda's freelancers who I am sure would be happy to quote you for their experience and time.

[tommyb]

Re: Looking for private critique(s) of my website

Well it may not be your niche..

http://www.bonushunting101.com/rushmore.php

http://www.bonushunting101.com/cherry_red.php

http://www.bonushunting101.com/slots_oasis.php

The links on the left do not work yet. And the right side is for ads, widgets, etc.

PS like i mentioned before, there is no page title and tags on the page.

Thanks :)

[tommyb]

Re: Looking for private critique(s) of my website

Also, any tips on organizing a larger site in BV?

Thanks :)

[Marincky]

Re: Looking for private critique(s) of my website

Well yes you're right, casino sites are not my niche, but having said that with regards to design, layout etc looking pretty good so far. With regards to advice on page titles and the likes, a site of this nature is going to need some extremely well researched optimisation and marketing and to be honest to get advice on this is more than likely going to cost you if you don't tackle it yourself. It's just too much to go into in a post on a forum. One thing I will say though is you will be competing with 'the big boys' on this one so you're in for a rough and probably expensive ride but I wish you all the luck with it.

To answer your page name question, use _ not -

You have your work cut out there!

[tommyb]

Re: Looking for private critique(s) of my website

Haha thanks. I know I have my work cut out for me. I'm doing it more as a hobby than a money making scheme. I plan on just doing lots of research on SEO and everything else and hopefully in the long run I can get something going. I plan on this to be a multi-year process to even get noticed once my site is finished.

Thanks again :)

[Marincky]

Re: Looking for private critique(s) of my website

Good attitude to have, you'll more than likely do a better job of it with that frame of thinking. Let us know how it goes.

[tommyb]

Re: Looking for private critique(s) of my website

Thanks again! I figure it would be better to try and have multiple sources of income rather than just one big one. But I'm sure you all know this.

Awesome site. Awesome product. Awesome members.

Thanks :)