Hey Check it out for me please.

**ahimsa** · 09-19-2009, 08:13 PM

Re: Hey Check it out for me please.

Hi Pat,
Home:lot of side-scroll
Our Vision: * We want to help individuals,
natural and man-made disasters
to a point where they never would have arrived,
Who is Fulton Sheen: main text needs to be a little more to the right or
start lower down."Your Comments" & "Contact Us" are
overlapping the first lines of the text
allowed Sheen to continue20??his extensive
writing.
OK, I may be dumb, but I'm a little confused here: if Fulton Sheen died in 1979, then who is the Fulton who has the calendar of events???
The Ministry Information links are not working...maybe you know that?
Are you Prepared: Sure you want to talk about BIRD flu & not SWINE flu
here??
when you see all these things, you know that it
is near,
Ministry Donations: link not working

Some general observations & purely my personal opinion:
some of the pages are a bit too long - could be you have plans for these spaces....but if not then I would shorten them.
a lot of times the font changes for no obvious reason eg. suddenly bold when no emphasis is apparent, different sizes etc....just a thought
...and finally - I notice that all the pages appear in my browser as Isaiah 58:12 & not the title of the page I'm on? I know you have that nice big bubble telling me on the page, but........

otherwise, pretty neat job,
david

**Alphatech** · 09-19-2009, 09:17 PM

Re: Hey Check it out for me please.

Hi Ahimsa,

As far as content that is the owners choice. I can make recomendations but this is his site.

Thanks for heads up on contact and comment button thought I had that fixed.

What do you mean side scroll on home page?

Ministry links are still in the works. and pages have much more material coming on Pandemics.

Fulton Sheen is here and now Bishop Sheen has gone home.

I really appreciate your time spent on this.
Thanks
God Bless
Pat

**Gunn R** · 09-20-2009, 02:08 AM

Re: Hey Check it out for me please.

Hi,
Doing a great job!
The background keeps moving from right on the home page to centre on others and then over to the left on other pages, not sure if this was on purpose but I think it would look better in a fixed position on every page.
Keep up the good work.

_______________
Rebecca
www.spyshop.ws
www.spyphones.ws

**indytnt** · 09-20-2009, 04:32 PM

Re: Hey Check it out for me please.

We noticed you're using a document font rather than a website font, which makes things more difficult to read. Also, your messages should not be more than 5.5 inches long.

The first paragraph of you Why Isaiah page should be the maximum width for all paragraphs throughout you site.

The header photo is blurred; making it smaller will make it more crisp.

For the ministry info tab, you will need to develop an intro page that introduces the future, past, and plan a trip pages. Right now, the ministry info tab leads to nowhere.

Also, there should be uniformity of pages. Make all pages to the left, right, or centered. Right now there is no consistancy.

**pink_eeyore** · 09-21-2009, 12:06 AM

Re: Hey Check it out for me please.

To make the message comment shape more appealing and crisp, in the property options for the shape check the anti-alias box (that goes for all shapes with curves). You should also center all of your pages to maintain a steady appeal. Personally, I do not like seeing thick boarders around the shapes because it distracts more than appealing.

Good luck! I remember when I started my first site... if it weren't for all the positive criticism, I know what viewers think visually which is extremely important!

**wysiwyg4** · 09-21-2009, 04:53 AM

Re: Hey Check it out for me please.

Each page should have its own unique title, keywords and description tags
defined and described according to its unique content.

Most of your pages have the same title. Google says have unique title.

One of the titles is "index.isaiah"????

"Your Comments" and "Contact us" can be combined in one page with
a short description.