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  • PASeasholtz
    Private First Class

    • Oct 2009
    • 7

    Please Review Sites

    I've just released my two sites, and any feedback would be appreciated.

    Thanks in advance.

    www.heartofhauden.com
    www.paseasholtz.com/blog
    P.A. Seasholtz

    www.heartofhauden.com
    www.paseasholtz.com
  • Karen Mac
    General

    • Apr 2006
    • 8332

    #2
    Re: Please Review Sites

    you have one site, two domains, and a blog. Not sure what you want me to say. Looks like an Amazon Book club site. Both of your domains point to one site...not sure why you didnt install the blog as the main course in the second one instead of redirecting it about.

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    • Gunn R
      Staff Sergeant

      • Aug 2009
      • 42

      #3
      Re: Please Review Sites

      Hi,
      You may want to click the 'centre in browser' button on your page properties as your website is over to the left of the screen and not the middle. Good Job.
      Cheers
      Gunn R.
      www.heal-eft.com

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      • PASeasholtz
        Private First Class

        • Oct 2009
        • 7

        #4
        Re: Please Review Sites

        Yup, good call on the centering. Thanks much!
        P.A. Seasholtz

        www.heartofhauden.com
        www.paseasholtz.com

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        • wysiwyg4
          Major

          • Nov 2007
          • 477

          #5
          Re: Please Review Sites

          If these books have come out and are in the market,
          you should have a specific link to the store pointing
          to your books. Like for example, Barnes & Nobel or Border
          or another chain like that.

          If you are selling them through Amazon, then you should
          directly be pointing to these books of yours.

          Any one reading your pages would expect to see these links
          or a shopping cart or paypal or credit card if you decide to sell
          them on your own.

          Or maybe you can start a chapter a week of all the books
          you have for free.

          What I mean is there is no business plan showing on these pages
          what you wanna do with them.

          Or maybe I am missing the whole point you may be making.

          Other than that, I think you have a super website.
          Doable Personal Finance

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          • PASeasholtz
            Private First Class

            • Oct 2009
            • 7

            #6
            Re: Please Review Sites

            Karen, not 100% sure I understood exactly what you meant regarding the redirection..however, it got me to thinking that I really did have it backwards. I moved the blog up to parent domain and then redirected the others (there is one more not public yet) into subdirectories. This made it more logical (from my stand point anyway) and will make managing the other domains easier I think.

            Thanks for getting me thinking, even if I didn't understand you 100%!
            P.A. Seasholtz

            www.heartofhauden.com
            www.paseasholtz.com

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            • indytnt
              First Sergeant

              • Jun 2009
              • 77

              #7
              Re: Please Review Sites

              Both sites look very nice; but we're like Shafi - We're wondering what the purpose of the sites are. If it is self-advertising, where do you buy, and for how much? If you want to share your work, offer it in some logical manner (Shafi suggested a chapter a week).
              Sincerely,
              Tim & Sonia Platt
              Indianpolis Tour & Travel
              http://www.timothycplatt.com/index.html
              http://www.scc-asp.org/index.html
              http://www.americanso******ts.org/index.html
              http://www.so******tpartyofusa.org/index.html
              http://www.tourofindianapolis.info/index.html
              http://www.ezhoneymoon.com/index.html
              http://www.indy-travel.com/index.html
              http://www.indy-tour.info/index.html

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              • Lerderderg
                Sergeant

                • Oct 2009
                • 23

                #8
                Re: Please Review Sites

                I agree with the direction stuff above.

                I like your sites visually though, the only thing is that the writing is too small. Just one size up would make for easier, less stress on the eyes reading!

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                • PASeasholtz
                  Private First Class

                  • Oct 2009
                  • 7

                  #9
                  Re: Please Review Sites

                  Got the font up a size. Thanks for that suggestion as it was a bit small.

                  Regarding the "purpose" of the site as questioned above, I will have the links to Amazon once I have that final information. Still looking around Thanksgiving for the release date. This was basically to get it out for feedback, much like what has been provided here. (And the Newsletter is "live", so I wanted to get the sites out there.)
                  P.A. Seasholtz

                  www.heartofhauden.com
                  www.paseasholtz.com

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                  • PASeasholtz
                    Private First Class

                    • Oct 2009
                    • 7

                    #10
                    Re: Please Review Sites

                    Added a background image to give the pages more "depth" - think it meets my goal of providing something other than plan white while not over-powering the text and images.
                    P.A. Seasholtz

                    www.heartofhauden.com
                    www.paseasholtz.com

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                    • srayhan777
                      Private

                      • Mar 2009
                      • 1

                      #11
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                      • Mind Game Creations.com

                        #12
                        Re: Please Review Sites

                        I like your websites they have nice colors. Are you the authur of these?

                        keep up the good work

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                        • PASeasholtz
                          Private First Class

                          • Oct 2009
                          • 7

                          #13
                          Re: Please Review Sites

                          Yes, I am the author.

                          Thanks for the feedback.
                          P.A. Seasholtz

                          www.heartofhauden.com
                          www.paseasholtz.com

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