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With the many grammatical errors and improper word usages, your site falls short of the professional presentation I believe you intend ... especially when confronted with a "Survey" pop-up asking visitors to rate it! Try to compose your Content in Word first, alowing the SpellCheck and Grammar Tool to proof it for you: in this case, you can simply copy your content directly from your BV page into Word to see the errors highlighted for you to correct before re-pasting back onto your BV page to be re-published.
Your site need not be complicated whatsoever, but attention to the most common of details is the absolute miniumum when the very purpose of a website (to effectively communicate digitally) is carelessly faulted in addition to the many 'missing' core page elements or attributes.
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1. You could make the title unique for every page per
the content or business of the page.
2. Have a good and unique description tag for each page.
3. Apart from money-saving coupons, at least on the
index page, invite folks and describe why you are different than
others - fresh ingredients, the dough is made special, etc. etc.
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Very Nice. Do you deliver? If so, you may want to consider allowing customers to make online orders as a competitive edge. Ordering online at home or the office is becoming popular.Sincerely,
Tim & Sonia Platt
Indianpolis Tour & Travel
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