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  • GoldDraco13
    Sergeant Major

    • Jun 2005
    • 92

    Website ready for critics

    Please review this site and let me know what you think!


    www.bertramservices.com
  • wilquasi
    Private

    • Oct 2009
    • 1

    #2
    Re: Website ready for critics

    bookmarked and b back l8er, bro,
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    • ahimsa
      Major General

      • Jan 2009
      • 2184

      #3
      Re: Website ready for critics

      Hi, first thing is I found the font way too small - very hard to read. Maybe by extending the length of the pages you could use a larger font without distracting from the overall look of the site?
      Second - all pages come up in my browser as Bertram Services so I can never be sure which page I'm on LOL
      Then the following.........
      .

      Home: At Bertram Gas Fireplace Service we know
      Customers:
      at Bertram Gas Fireplace Service. We respond
      Information: Seems to me that only the 'orange' text is new....all the other "information" has already been featured on other pages.....just an observation.

      Otherwise a pretty nice job!
      good luck,
      david

      Never measure the height of the mountain you're climbing. At the summit, look back and see how small it really is!

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      • DarrenC
        Brigadier General

        • Jul 2008
        • 1750

        #4
        Re: Website ready for critics

        I agree completely with David with the text being to small. it does challange the eyes some what?

        David has also mentioned your page titles. Search this forum for help on this.

        Your pages flow very nicely but your contact page needs shifting to the right slightly so it is in the exact same place as the others.

        Overal looks really good
        Happy Building

        DarrenC

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        • DarrenC
          Brigadier General

          • Jul 2008
          • 1750

          #5
          Re: Website ready for critics

          What could be good is create a new page called 'support_centre', insert an I-Frame to call up this url http://bertramservices.com/ost/view.php. This way you can keep this feature within your site......Just an idea!!
          Happy Building

          DarrenC

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          • Collectors-info
            General

            • Feb 2006
            • 8703

            #6
            Re: Website ready for critics

            Looks like a real nice site. But ditto with the others on the font size.
            Regards Chris.

            Collectables, Collecting, collectors-info.com

            www.chrismorris.co.uk

            House build project

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            • GoldDraco13
              Sergeant Major

              • Jun 2005
              • 92

              #7
              Re: Website ready for critics

              Thanks all, I'll make the changes as soon as possible!

              GD13,

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              • GoldDraco13
                Sergeant Major

                • Jun 2005
                • 92

                #8
                Re: Website ready for critics

                Thanks again everyone!

                I've made the changes above, what do you all think?

                GD13,

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                • ahimsa
                  Major General

                  • Jan 2009
                  • 2184

                  #9
                  Re: Website ready for critics

                  ....much better!
                  good luck,
                  david
                  Never measure the height of the mountain you're climbing. At the summit, look back and see how small it really is!

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                  • Collectors-info
                    General

                    • Feb 2006
                    • 8703

                    #10
                    Re: Website ready for critics

                    Ah! I can see.
                    Lot better on the eye's.
                    Regards Chris.

                    Collectables, Collecting, collectors-info.com

                    www.chrismorris.co.uk

                    House build project

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                    • DarrenC
                      Brigadier General

                      • Jul 2008
                      • 1750

                      #11
                      Re: Website ready for critics

                      Yes it looks a lot better. Its just a shame the I-Frame on this page isn't quite wide enough to accommodate the content in it http://bertramservices.com/supportcenter.html I maybe inclined to sacrifice the left hand menu to stretch the I-Frame across and have just a 'home' link positioned above it.
                      Happy Building

                      DarrenC

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                      • GoldDraco13
                        Sergeant Major

                        • Jun 2005
                        • 92

                        #12
                        Re: Website ready for critics

                        Originally posted by DarrenC View Post
                        Yes it looks a lot better. Its just a shame the I-Frame on this page isn't quite wide enough to accommodate the content in it http://bertramservices.com/supportcenter.html I maybe inclined to sacrifice the left hand menu to stretch the I-Frame across and have just a 'home' link positioned above it.

                        I was thinking about that last night, I think your 100% right though, I'll make the changes today!

                        Thanks again all for the reviews, it *****ened up the site ten folds!

                        GD13,

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                        • wysiwyg4
                          Major

                          • Nov 2007
                          • 477

                          #13
                          Re: Website ready for critics

                          I think you have a great website.

                          On the index page, you could make the title a little more descriptive.

                          For example,
                          Bertram Gas Fireplace Services - Fireplace Cleaning, Fireplace repair

                          Similar for other pages as well.

                          On every page, title can start with "Bertram Gas Fireplace Services"
                          and then some specific for that page.
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                          • bravo75
                            Sergeant First Class

                            • Feb 2009
                            • 58

                            #14
                            Re: Website ready for critics

                            Nice, how do you plan on promoting it?

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                            • GoldDraco13
                              Sergeant Major

                              • Jun 2005
                              • 92

                              #15
                              Re: Website ready for critics

                              I'll consider adding more discription to the title, good idea!

                              I've been promoting it via local advertising and online sites such as www.kijiji.com, I also have the web address on our business cards for customer to review for more information on gas fireplaces in general!

                              Besides using the site as a information site for our business, I wanted to provide information for any and all home owners to what they should know about their gas fireplace, hence the government link to a great online guide explaining gas fireplaces as a whole!

                              I also added code from google to help improve our listing on their search engine, as well as some of their ad sence on contact page!

                              Any other ideas to better promote our site are greatly welcomed!

                              Thanks again everyone for your reviews!

                              GD13,

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