Please review my site!

[Arjuna Drill]

Hello everyon! I have had voda for quite sometime...4 or 5 years actually. Great site btw.

Anywho please come check out my website! I just re-did it for the new season I'll be going into. It's pretty cool...you may even find yourself entertained while there. Thanks

Arjuna Myles
www.arjunadrill.us

[Alien Dude]

Re: Please review my site!

After a quick look overall not bad, the only thing that grabbed me was the quality of the graphics in the header and side part seem a bit grainy the graphic on the animation1.html page one one made up of three incorperating a A/D and a star shape is very clear and stands out well, might be a idea to have that in the header and work the rest around that image, makes a good logo.

[ahimsa]

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Hi Arjuna,
Pretty good job - here's what I found: some general comments first - Opening page: you have the ENTER button below the video (which btw took so long to load that I didn't wait!) Why? I ask only because you have all the page links at the top anyway!
Home: Ok, my eyes are more than 60 years old but I found the blue light shining through the middle of the text very hard on them! Some text corrections: Bands nowadays........ best fits YOU and YOUR band's needs.............already seen (in one way.............I offer the most affordable drill around!
A little bit of side-scroll & the link under Software is not a link!!?
Animation: because I have come to find it has the most effective ways of use. This just doesn't ring too well - maybe try: because I have come to find it is the most effective. The videos, again, I found took too long to load - the YouTube ones were great! Under the Animation Specs you have some features with * & some with - why not make them all the same?
viewing will be quick and easy....even for dial up users!
Pre-Designed Shows: Custom shows are written to your band's exact
Prices & Packages: underneath the field "than"..........Depending on your bands size and difficulty level of drill will determine a fair price. I would change this to: Your Band's size and difficulty level will determine our fair price (note the ' in Band's!).......Please contact me for a quote. No 'price'. Under Special Features: your band's eyes! Under How Many Pages: no matter your band's size Under Special Request: Time slots will be first come first serveD

But, overall, a really nice site & I wish you lots of luck for next summer,
david

[Collectors-info]

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Ditto with above & defiantly loose the video on the front page. Pop it on a page as a link so the visitor can deicide if to wait.

[Arjuna Drill]

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Thank you all for the great information and advice! David, I really appreciate the grammer corrections and detail in your responce! I will definitely fix some of those things and see what I can do about the videos! Thanks again!!!

-Arjuna

[Arjuna Drill]

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Hey...do you guys mind me asking what kind of internet connection you have? I have just never had a problem loading any of the videos on any computers ive used. Also what browser are you using? Thanks!