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  • Arjuna Drill
    Private

    • Nov 2009
    • 4

    Please review my site!

    Hello everyon! I have had voda for quite sometime...4 or 5 years actually. Great site btw.

    Anywho please come check out my website! I just re-did it for the new season I'll be going into. It's pretty cool...you may even find yourself entertained while there. Thanks

    Arjuna Myles
    www.arjunadrill.us
  • Alien Dude
    Lieutenant Colonel

    • Apr 2008
    • 559

    #2
    Re: Please review my site!

    After a quick look overall not bad, the only thing that grabbed me was the quality of the graphics in the header and side part seem a bit grainy the graphic on the animation1.html page one one made up of three incorperating a A/D and a star shape is very clear and stands out well, might be a idea to have that in the header and work the rest around that image, makes a good logo.
    Alien Dude Solutions

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    • ahimsa
      Major General

      • Jan 2009
      • 2184

      #3
      Re: Please review my site!

      Hi Arjuna,
      Pretty good job - here's what I found: some general comments first -
      Opening page: you have the ENTER button below the video (which btw took so long to load that I didn't wait!) Why? I ask only because you have all the page links at the top anyway!
      Home: Ok, my eyes are more than 60 years old but I found the blue light shining through the middle of the text very hard on them! Some text corrections: Bands nowadays........ best fits YOU and YOUR band's needs.............already seen (in one way.............I offer the most affordable drill around!
      A little bit of side-scroll & the link under Software is not a link!!?
      Animation:
      because I have come to find it has the most effective ways of use. This just doesn't ring too well - maybe try: because I have come to find it is the most effective. The videos, again, I found took too long to load - the YouTube ones were great! Under the Animation Specs you have some features with * & some with - why not make them all the same?
      viewing will be quick and easy....even for dial up users!
      Pre-Designed Shows: Custom shows are written to your band's exact
      Prices & Packages: underneath the field "than"
      ..........Depending on your bands size and difficulty level of drill will determine a fair price. I would change this to: Your Band's size and difficulty level will determine our fair price (note the ' in Band's!).......Please contact me for a quote. No 'price'. Under Special Features: your band's eyes! Under How Many Pages: no matter your band's size Under Special Request: Time slots will be first come first serveD

      But, overall, a really nice site & I wish you lots of luck for next summer,
      david

      Never measure the height of the mountain you're climbing. At the summit, look back and see how small it really is!

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      • Collectors-info
        General

        • Feb 2006
        • 8703

        #4
        Re: Please review my site!

        Ditto with above & defiantly loose the video on the front page. Pop it on a page as a link so the visitor can deicide if to wait.
        Regards Chris.

        Collectables, Collecting, collectors-info.com

        www.chrismorris.co.uk

        House build project

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        • Arjuna Drill
          Private

          • Nov 2009
          • 4

          #5
          Re: Please review my site!

          Thank you all for the great information and advice! David, I really appreciate the grammer corrections and detail in your responce! I will definitely fix some of those things and see what I can do about the videos! Thanks again!!!

          -Arjuna

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          • Arjuna Drill
            Private

            • Nov 2009
            • 4

            #6
            Re: Please review my site!

            Hey...do you guys mind me asking what kind of internet connection you have? I have just never had a problem loading any of the videos on any computers ive used. Also what browser are you using? Thanks!

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