Website Review

[Patrick_Sin]

Hello

My URL: http://www.hair-loss-treatment.biz

Please review my website and I would appreciate your comments. Also if possible, please offer your solution especially the text and images of all pages seem loading faster than the background template; thus making it looks disintegrated.

Thank you and best regards,
Patrick

[ahimsa]

Re: Website Review

Hi Patrick,
first of all the loading for me was satisfactory. I found the following, however:
On all pages except 'Treatment' you have a white space to the right of the page - either fill this or adjust the page width. On the Treatment page the right border is not aligned correctly & so looks disjointed.
Also every page opens in a new tab.
All your pages have the same title: "Hair Loss Treatment"
The "Order Now" link doesn't work
About Us: in Singapore and are open
About Hair Loss: Hair, though contributing no vital function

OK - sorry, I started to proofread your pages but I see there is just too much to correct! My advice is to recruit the services of a proofreader who is fluent in English & has a good knowledge of grammar & spelling. You have a lot of text & it's too much for me at the moment...sorry.
Good luck,
david

[Patrick_Sin]

Re: Website Review

Yes my English is horrible!!!

tank you for your conman

Don't mind getting me a poof-reader ?

Patrick