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please test our site and give us feedback we are very new and this is our 1st site any help welcome
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Re: www.nbdreams.co.uk
where is the link for the website?mrmagoo144
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Re: www.nbdreams.co.uk
For building your first website bluevoda is definately the best to use as you can practically do anything with it.
What immediately stands out is you have no structure to your site, you know the sort of thing, You need a header, a footer, a background.
My first bit of advice for you would be to do a google search for similar type companies for an idea of how you should put your site together.
You have some good content but you need to dress it up now to make it appealling to your visitor.
All the bestHappy Building
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Re: www.nbdreams.co.uk
just a few things that i see:
1. home page takes over 1 minute to load - background picture is 965 x1600 and you page finishes well before 1600
2. home page should finish sooner - closer to end of picture - can continue to see white as you scroll down.
3. cant read the dark blue type very easily - also couple of mistakes in grammar - 2 "our" & the line "gives you the a personal service"
4. booking page - form not done correctly - needs validation - also needs to be tab sensitive, meaning a visitor should be able to use the tab key and it will go to the next field. suggest you watch the tutorials again and again as forms are very tricky. Also with your form once someone submits they get the thank you page which takes them out of your site. should have navigation menu on your thank you page as well and the link should not be _blank.
5. booking page and hire terms page are not centered.
hope this helps you out. good luck.mrmagoo144
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