www.backyardastronomer.net

[dlpjr]

First site I have published what do you think ? I would like your input.
backyardastronomer.net

Dave

[Collectors-info]

Re: www.backyardastronomer.net

Need to get some of the basics sorted.
1. Need to use your page properties & have the page at a max of 980 wide
to suite most screens. (At the moment there is a lot of side scroll.
2. Need to check the centre in browser box.
3. Need to cut back on your keywords & also have them within the content
of your page. (The SE's will penalise you otherwise)
4. Build your pages from the far left of your BV screen.

[Millie.T.Cook]

Re: www.backyardastronomer.net

Great content, but scrolling to the right is not the norm.

[dlpjr]

Re: www.backyardastronomer.net

I have made some changes, try this out and see if its any better http://www.backyardastronomer.net

Thanks for the help

Dave

[dlpjr]

Re: www.backyardastronomer.net

Need to get some of the basics sorted.
1. Need to use your page properties & have the page at a max of 980 wide
to suite most screens. (At the moment there is a lot of side scroll.
2. Need to check the centre in browser box.
3. Need to cut back on your keywords & also have them within the content
of your page. (The SE's will penalise you otherwise)
4. Build your pages from the far left of your BV screen.

I have made some changes check it out now, http://www.backyardastronomer.net

Thank you for the help

Dave

[dlpjr]

Site Review

http://www.backyardastronomer.net was hoping for a review.

Dave

[ahimsa]

Re: www.backyardastronomer.net

Hi Dave,
nice design & layout - unfortunately the whole thing is spoiled somewhat by the number of typos & other grammar errors. I can give you here a few examples but I think you need to have the whole site checked :(
Home: ...all known objects..... Solar System - Our Solar System. Interested in learning more about our Solar System? Then check this page out. Dictionary - Under Construction.

...and so on! Also, the word photos is written WITHOUT an ' !! Sorry but that happens all over your site........
david

[Collectors-info]

Re: www.backyardastronomer.net

Thread moved. Only one site review posting please.

[dlpjr]

Re: www.backyardastronomer.net

Hi Dave,
nice design & layout - unfortunately the whole thing is spoiled somewhat by the number of typos & other grammar errors. I can give you here a few examples but I think you need to have the whole site checked :(
Home: ...all known objects..... Solar System - Our Solar System. Interested in learning more about our Solar System? Then check this page out. Dictionary - Under Construction.

...and so on! Also, the word photos is written WITHOUT an ' !! Sorry but that happens all over your site........
david

I really haven't done the final spell check yet, I was having a problem with the width of the site, I guess there was a lot of scrolling. Is that fixed?

[dlpjr]

Re: www.backyardastronomer.net

First site I have published what do you think ? I would like your input.
backyardastronomer.net

Dave

Was wondering about this page http://www.backyardastronomer.net/videos1.php
Are the pop ups, popping up. and staying in an 980 size page.

[DarrenC]

Re: www.backyardastronomer.net

Your pop ups are popping up just fine!!

[dlpjr]

Re: www.backyardastronomer.net

Your pop ups are popping up just fine!!

Thanks for the help

[Collectors-info]

Re: www.backyardastronomer.net

Looking a lot better now. Still have the odd wide pages, but time will sort it out. (Or space)