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Started a golf club and thought a website would be useful. Very steep learning curve for me with a lot of help from everyone. Please take a look. Thanks. www.epmgc.com.
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Re: Please critique my first attempt
Not bad for a first timer.
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I would move the green lettering above the name board to about center of the height of the roof so that the country club name will become more visible.
I would also movee the Eagle Cup in a vertical row to the right withe News underneath it.
You have so much more space at the bottom where you can
try using the conveyor belt running across the page showing some of the club scenes or activity.
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Wow, thanks for your response. The conveyor belt idea is awesome. I'm all over it!Comment
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Design concept is nice :)
One thing you should do something with is upper menu:
1) Try to make text menu in one line.
2) Green text on green background is not the best idea. Try to make it bold and yellow for example.
Another thing:
Try to center page horizontally (you can make it in page properties).
Third thing I would change: try to make page higher OR make dark background, 'cos now main page is looking like a dark brick hanging in the air :) a little dangerrous feeling ;)))Comment
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Purely a personal view. But looks a little congested to me. Need to have things like images of pepole on a plain background & the same with the conveyor belt.
The background image is slow for slow broadband users, & dial up wont stand a chance at 1300kb for the image & 1850kb for the whole front page.
You need to aim at your pages being around 2-300kb max to please all visitors.
Many of your internal pages have no keywords & no description.Comment
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Thanks to all. I really appreciate the time you took to respond!Comment
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Looks good, well done.
Photos on a plain backround is a good idea. Also I am viewing on wifi 54kbs, and your backround picture took a long time to download fully.
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