what's wrong?

Collapse
X
 
  • Filter
  • Time
  • Show
Clear All
new posts
  • jasond
    Sergeant First Class

    • Mar 2006
    • 50

    what's wrong?

    hey all,
    if you would, please look at this page and tell me the problem. something is not right & i can't place it. maybe the way the description is. it functions ok but i just don't like it. some input would be great.

    thanks

  • SChajin
    Major General

    • Jan 2006
    • 2792

    #2
    Re: what's wrong?

    Maybe if it was centered. Looks good though.

    SChajin

    www.gladyourgone.com
    Sharon Chajin

    Comment

    • Girlonthehill
      General

      • Oct 2005
      • 4193

      #3
      Re: what's wrong?

      It's good but I know what you mean. (I think it's the lack of a hint of green - not electric green like your deal of the week was - something a little more understated. I've got green on the brain today! Lol.) The blue and the maroon are both dark if not green something to balance the dark colours? I'd play about see what you can come up with.

      VodaHost

      Your Website People!
      1-302-283-3777 North America / International
      02036089024 / United Kingdom
      291916438 / Australia

      ------------------------

      Top 3 Best Sellers

      Web Hosting - Unlimited disk space & bandwidth.

      Reseller Hosting - Start your own web hosting business.

      Search Engine & Directory Submission - 300 directories + (Google,Yahoo,Bing)


      Comment

      • jasond
        Sergeant First Class

        • Mar 2006
        • 50

        #4
        Re: what's wrong?

        how about this? not sure i like it http://www.appelcreek.com/gps.html

        Comment

        • SChajin
          Major General

          • Jan 2006
          • 2792

          #5
          Re: what's wrong?

          Sorry, now it looks stretched out, just don't know.
          Sharon Chajin

          Comment

          • Girlonthehill
            General

            • Oct 2005
            • 4193

            #6
            Re: what's wrong?

            Originally posted by jasond
            how about this? not sure i like it http://www.appelcreek.com/gps.html
            Mmmm. It's a tad dark all over now. I get a 3 inch white gap down the side which might make me see it differently. The product description text is very small by the way - try using a larger font. That background does make it appear warmer but worry that it's taking the eye away from the products. Sorry this is disjointed - I keep going back and looking. Sorry if I'm not helping much.

            VodaHost

            Your Website People!
            1-302-283-3777 North America / International
            02036089024 / United Kingdom
            291916438 / Australia

            ------------------------

            Top 3 Best Sellers

            Web Hosting - Unlimited disk space & bandwidth.

            Reseller Hosting - Start your own web hosting business.

            Search Engine & Directory Submission - 300 directories + (Google,Yahoo,Bing)


            Comment

            • Bird
              Captain

              • Oct 2005
              • 202

              #7
              Re: what's wrong?

              Your background is a gif, and it was saved with a smaller resolution.
              bv01362.gif.........do you have the original picture? A better quality pic would have 250 color settings.
              It needs to be a jpg or jpeg. thats why it looks a little odd and messed up.
              check it out and see if it helps. I would also center it in the browser. And perhaps a light grey background? this is only my opinion.

              http://www.fromtheheartofangels.com/

              Comment

              • jasond
                Sergeant First Class

                • Mar 2006
                • 50

                #8
                Re: what's wrong?

                how about now?



                gap still there?

                Comment

                • thjallen
                  Corporal

                  • Nov 2005
                  • 13

                  #9
                  Re: what's wrong?

                  I like the site, but maybe the font is a little small. And make the page width smaller. My pages tend to do that too.

                  It does look very professional in my opinion.
                  Autovenom
                  www.autovenom.com

                  Comment

                  • daveshore
                    Sergeant First Class

                    • Jul 2005
                    • 53

                    #10
                    Re: what's wrong?

                    I would just make 2 changes - center the page and change the font.

                    I'm viewing this on a 17" monitor and this leaves a big gap at the right side of the screen, so if you center the page then this will give a more balanced view for all monitor sizes.

                    If you look at the fonts you've chosen, you have a mixture between the top and the body. The clearer text to read is at the top and I think that is Arial, so perhaps convert the other text to Arial from Times Roman?

                    Apart from that, the site looks good.

                    Hope this helps you.

                    Regards,
                    Dave Shore

                    Comment

                    • Girlonthehill
                      General

                      • Oct 2005
                      • 4193

                      #11
                      Re: what's wrong?

                      Originally posted by jasond
                      Hello Jason,

                      You've worked so hard and I think it's paid off. I agree with everything that Dave says. Its looking very good but the text is still a tad small and difficult to read. Nearly their mate. :o)

                      VodaHost

                      Your Website People!
                      1-302-283-3777 North America / International
                      02036089024 / United Kingdom
                      291916438 / Australia

                      ------------------------

                      Top 3 Best Sellers

                      Web Hosting - Unlimited disk space & bandwidth.

                      Reseller Hosting - Start your own web hosting business.

                      Search Engine & Directory Submission - 300 directories + (Google,Yahoo,Bing)


                      Comment

                      • jasond
                        Sergeant First Class

                        • Mar 2006
                        • 50

                        #12
                        Re: what's wrong?

                        thanks dave/amanda,
                        my settings must be different than others, i too have a 17" monitor & i do not see a gap. hrmmmm.

                        the font issue, i think i'm so consumed with other things, i keep forgetting about it.

                        boy, i better see increased sales from this site for all the effort i've put into it! :)

                        Comment

                        • pet121
                          webmaster

                          • May 2005
                          • 257

                          #13
                          Re: what's wrong?

                          This has to be quick I am being nagged to get off my computer. NO KEYWORDS?

                          Comment

                          • jasond
                            Sergeant First Class

                            • Mar 2006
                            • 50

                            #14
                            Re: what's wrong?

                            Originally posted by pet121
                            This has to be quick I am being nagged to get off my computer. NO KEYWORDS?
                            done! :)

                            Comment

                            Working...
                            X