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  • DarrenC
    Brigadier General

    • Jul 2008
    • 1750

    Please review

    Hi my fellow Vodahosters, please can review/critique this website
    Thanks
    adams place Kalkan
    Happy Building

    DarrenC
  • WSBlue
    Brigadier General

    • Apr 2006
    • 1415

    #2
    Re: Please review

    Nice job.

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    • marciemayer
      Captain

      • Jan 2007
      • 233

      #3
      Re: Please review

      Very nice work, all your sites look well organized and attractive.
      I especially like the expanding photo box you have used and will
      try to figure out how you did this. I don't believe my old version
      of BV has this option!
      Marcie
      www.redtractorfarm.com
      www.iloveacorns.com
      www.halfkilofeta.com

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      • DarrenC
        Brigadier General

        • Jul 2008
        • 1750

        #4
        Re: Please review

        Originally posted by WSBlue View Post
        Nice job.
        Thanks WSBlue :)
        Happy Building

        DarrenC

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        • DarrenC
          Brigadier General

          • Jul 2008
          • 1750

          #5
          Re: Please review

          Originally posted by marciemayer View Post
          Very nice work, all your sites look well organized and attractive.
          I especially like the expanding photo box you have used and will
          try to figure out how you did this. I don't believe my old version
          of BV has this option!
          Thanks Marcie, I used the BV lightbox for the photos. Its been around a while now so you should have it. :)
          Happy Building

          DarrenC

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          • ahimsa
            Major General

            • Jan 2009
            • 2184

            #6
            Re: Please review

            Hi Darren,
            great job as usual..........BUT, no-one's perfect.....you: almost LOL
            only 2 teeny little things:


            Location: Adam's Place Location and
            Menu:
            Adam's Special Hot Cheese
            funny how they're similar errors, eh? :)

            david

            Never measure the height of the mountain you're climbing. At the summit, look back and see how small it really is!

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            • DarrenC
              Brigadier General

              • Jul 2008
              • 1750

              #7
              Re: Please review

              Originally posted by ahimsa View Post
              Hi Darren,
              great job as usual..........BUT, no-one's perfect.....you: almost LOL
              only 2 teeny little things:


              Location: Adam's Place Location and
              Menu:
              Adam's Special Hot Cheese
              funny how they're similar errors, eh? :)

              david

              Cheers mate. I was hoping you'd take a look. You're the best spell checker I know :)
              Happy Building

              DarrenC

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              • ahimsa
                Major General

                • Jan 2009
                • 2184

                #8
                Re: Please review

                yw ...
                Never measure the height of the mountain you're climbing. At the summit, look back and see how small it really is!

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                • CarbonTerry
                  Major General

                  • Oct 2005
                  • 2620

                  #9
                  Re: Please review

                  Attractive site.....

                  Some comments.

                  Tulle is still very much in charge of the kitchen.
                  Most of the produce used, including (as well as) some of the
                  meat, is grown by them and the remainder purchased
                  very carefully (selectfully ...maybe?) in the local area.

                  Is meat "grown"? Possible a difference in UK/US syntax??

                  To me it would read better:
                  Most of the produce used is grown by Tulle.
                  Some meat and produce is carefully selected from local sources.

                  Deliberately constructed (located..??) out of the over crowded village and to (delete and to & insert we) we provide a more tranquil atmosphere in which to dine. The Restaurant is approximately 3kms away on the main road to Kas.

                  We have visited Kalkan since 1991. and (delete and as a run on sentence) Adam's new
                  location is absolutely superb...He collected us from
                  CarbonTerry
                  Semper Fi
                  Still green...still mean......just not as lean

                  Red Hawk Archery
                  Zone 5 Photo
                  My USMC

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                  • DarrenC
                    Brigadier General

                    • Jul 2008
                    • 1750

                    #10
                    Re: Please review

                    Originally posted by CarbonTerry View Post
                    Attractive site.....

                    Some comments.

                    Tulle is still very much in charge of the kitchen.
                    Most of the produce used, including (as well as) some of the
                    meat, is grown by them and the remainder purchased
                    very carefully (selectfully ...maybe?) in the local area.

                    Is meat "grown"? Possible a difference in UK/US syntax??

                    To me it would read better:
                    Most of the produce used is grown by Tulle.
                    Some meat and produce is carefully selected from local sources.

                    Deliberately constructed (located..??) out of the over crowded village and to (delete and to & insert we) we provide a more tranquil atmosphere in which to dine. The Restaurant is approximately 3kms away on the main road to Kas.

                    We have visited Kalkan since 1991. and (delete and as a run on sentence) Adam's new
                    location is absolutely superb...He collected us from
                    Cheers CT, much appreciated :)
                    Happy Building

                    DarrenC

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                    • CarbonTerry
                      Major General

                      • Oct 2005
                      • 2620

                      #11
                      Re: Please review

                      yw
                      CarbonTerry
                      Semper Fi
                      Still green...still mean......just not as lean

                      Red Hawk Archery
                      Zone 5 Photo
                      My USMC

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