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  • Donnasangster
    Private

    • Jul 2010
    • 2

    First attempt - only 3 pages so far - feedback?

    Hi
    This is my first attempt at a website. I have only three pages published so far while we work on the rest. Any comments gratefully accepted.

    www.mintlawvets.co.uk
  • DarrenC
    Brigadier General

    • Jul 2008
    • 1750

    #2
    Re: First attempt - only 3 pages so far - feedback?

    Yep...Looking good.

    You could embed the google map into your page by using the generated code given and pasting it it into a html box. Follow this link http://maps.google.co.uk/maps/empw?u...ed&hl=en&gl=uk
    Happy Building

    DarrenC

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    • ahimsa
      Major General

      • Jan 2009
      • 2184

      #3
      Re: First attempt - only 3 pages so far - feedback?

      ditto + only typo I found was this:

      The classic Kong chew toys are a great way to keep your dog amused

      on your Products page......well done & good luck,
      david
      Never measure the height of the mountain you're climbing. At the summit, look back and see how small it really is!

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      • Vasili
        Moderator

        • Mar 2006
        • 14683

        #4
        Re: First attempt - only 3 pages so far - feedback?

        OK .... did you go out on strike?
        We've been waiting to see your next phase of development for some time now ....
        . VodaWebs....Luxury Group
        * Success Is Potential Realized *

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        • nzbr
          Lieutenant Colonel

          • Dec 2006
          • 546

          #5
          Re: First attempt - only 3 pages so far - feedback?

          Hi there,
          Don't like the fonts you are using, specially the one in the menu bars: home, directions, the nurses, products.

          Good luck!
          N Z B R
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          • Donnasangster
            Private

            • Jul 2010
            • 2

            #6
            Re: First attempt - only 3 pages so far - feedback?

            Hi Vasili, not on strike lol, just been really busy with work and not much time to get things done. More soon, promise!!

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            • Vasili
              Moderator

              • Mar 2006
              • 14683

              #7
              Re: First attempt - only 3 pages so far - feedback?

              Originally posted by Donnasangster View Post
              Hi Vasili, not on strike lol, just been really busy with work and not much time to get things done. More soon, promise!!
              Starting to sound too much like me!
              . VodaWebs....Luxury Group
              * Success Is Potential Realized *

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              • Collectors-info
                General

                • Feb 2006
                • 8703

                #8
                Re: First attempt - only 3 pages so far - feedback?

                Ditto with the menu font not looking very clear. Would also go through most of your images & resize them to the size you want on the page to help with fast loading & to remove the distortion on some of them.
                Would loose the dental image on the Nurse page to something more appealing, maybe the http://www.mintlawvets.co.uk/images/...x%20600%29.jpg image.
                If you do resize your images correctly, it would be a good time to give all the images a SE friendly name that would be used in a search. IE: instead of "bv01141" as an image name, it could be "dog dental check" with a good alt text to help.

                Off to a good start, good luck.
                Regards Chris.

                Collectables, Collecting, collectors-info.com

                www.chrismorris.co.uk

                House build project

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                • Sally - La Festa
                  First Sergeant

                  • Jul 2009
                  • 77

                  #9
                  Re: First attempt - only 3 pages so far - feedback?

                  I like it!

                  I think on the Products page you could move things round a bit, you start the products with a wide left margin, then you've moved into the left hand side more further down. Maybe have a juggle and start more to the left from "Pet Head" so you don't have the problem of not fitting in the pics and text.

                  Nice clean site though, easy to navigate. I agree with changing the teeth picture, isn't there a cute picture somewhere of a dog having it's teeth brushed? :)
                  Sally
                  www.weddingbookerslakecomo.com
                  info@weddingbookerslakecomo.com

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