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  • deako4
    Corporal

    • Aug 2008
    • 12

    Please take a look at my site

    Hi!

    I have just finished updating my site: to-haveandtohold.com

    The new version should have blue boxes, (I've had problems publishing, so would be grateful if you can tell me which version you can see!) my old version had purple and grey, but I felt it needed to have a fresh, clean look to it.

    Please tell me what you think.

    celiamike@to-haveandtohold.com

    Blessings,

    Celia
  • Tom vR
    Brigadier General

    • Apr 2007
    • 1731

    #2
    Re: Please take a look at my site

    Hi Celia,

    I see your old pages. It looks like your new pages are .php extension and the old pages are .html. Right? If so, then you need to delete the .html pages from the server.


    Most images have red crosses. You need to re-define them and re-bublish.
    The pages is very long to scroll down. Nothing wrong, but could be better if you can spread the content over various pages.
    Bless you
    Tom

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    • deako4
      Corporal

      • Aug 2008
      • 12

      #3
      Re: Please take a look at my site

      Thanks Tom,
      I have managed to re-publish but have some script/code at the top. not sure what it is or how to get rid of it?

      Also not too sure about the settings for the guest book.

      Overall I'm quite pleased (not to say relieved!) to have actually got this far!

      I was advised to keep the person reading it on one page, as they sometimes get distracted when clicking onto other pages.

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      • deako4
        Corporal

        • Aug 2008
        • 12

        #4
        Re: Please take a look at my site

        OOOOOOhhhh look! I've got two stripes up! Woohoo!

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        • Mook25
          Brigadier General

          • Oct 2005
          • 1427

          #5
          Re: Please take a look at my site

          There are some images not showing which would mean the links are broken so need republishing as Tom said and in my browser, safari, some of the writing overlaps each other. For example the bit at the top 'I re-married my ex-husband after 18 years apart!' sits right on top of 'Read the amazing, true story of Faith, Hope and Discovery'.

          I would also say to split over a few pages, If your front page grabs their attention enough then they'll be compelled to read on. This is just my opinion though and some people don't mind long scrolling pages.

          Other than that, it's looking good so well done.
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          • Vasili
            Moderator

            • Mar 2006
            • 14683

            #6
            Re: Please take a look at my site

            We need to see some progress on your site .....
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