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  • PlayItByBeer
    Lieutenant Colonel

    • Mar 2007
    • 653

    Online Dance Studio Website & Cart Review

    I'm in the process of designing a Online Dance Lessons website and would appreciate your comments & crits.

    This one also makes use of Navaldesign's great PayPal Shopping Cart.
    Andrew

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  • DarrenC
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    • Jul 2008
    • 1750

    #2
    Re: Online Dance Studio Website & Cart Review

    Very nice indeed!!
    Happy Building

    DarrenC

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    • PlayItByBeer
      Lieutenant Colonel

      • Mar 2007
      • 653

      #3
      Re: Online Dance Studio Website & Cart Review

      Originally posted by PapaBiker View Post
      Thumbs up! A new look for an older service ... should breathe some new life into the business ....
      Thanks PapaBiker
      Andrew

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      • ahimsa
        Major General

        • Jan 2009
        • 2184

        #4
        Re: Online Dance Studio Website & Cart Review

        Hi Andrew,
        seems like you keep having customers who don't check their text?
        Found this on the front page & there are a few more dotted throughout the site......sorry lol

        Are you being left behind on the dance floor

        otherwise....up to your usual standard: nice
        david
        Never measure the height of the mountain you're climbing. At the summit, look back and see how small it really is!

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        • PlayItByBeer
          Lieutenant Colonel

          • Mar 2007
          • 653

          #5
          Re: Online Dance Studio Website & Cart Review

          Originally posted by ahimsa View Post
          Hi Andrew,
          seems like you keep having customers who don't check their text?
          Found this on the front page & there are a few more dotted throughout the site......sorry lol

          Are you being left behind on the dance floor

          otherwise....up to your usual standard: nice
          david
          LOL Thanks David,

          The client is Afrikaans (similar to Dutch) and I found loads of errors. Maybe it's time for fresh eyes to proof.

          Thanks,
          Andrew

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          • Patience
            Brigadier General

            • Mar 2007
            • 1011

            #6
            Re: Online Dance Studio Website & Cart Review

            Lovely site. Easy to navigate. Spell check my friend...
            Vicki

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            • narobe
              First Lieutenant

              • Apr 2006
              • 182

              #7
              Re: Online Dance Studio Website & Cart Review

              Very visual and easy to follow.

              "Dance students are able to choose the dance they like..."
              perhaps
              "Dance students are able to choose the style they like.." or

              "Students can choose the style they like"... would be perfectly in context and understood.

              I personally find the first paragraph a bit awkward becuase the word dance is used so many times.

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              • wysiwyg4
                Major

                • Nov 2007
                • 477

                #8
                Re: Online Dance Studio Website & Cart Review

                I agree with narobe.

                Dance Acceleration offers comprehensive online dance lessons, dance videos and dance tutorials by professional dance instructors. With the help of cutting edge technology, Dance Acceleration will cater for all your dancing needs. Dance students are able to choose the dance they like, select the level at which they are comfortable learning, read the user friendly dance tutorials and watch professional, easy to understand dance videos. You can learn to dance online today.

                could be written as

                Dance Acceleration offers comprehensive online dance lessons, videos and tutorials by professional instructors. With the help of cutting edge technology, Dance Acceleration will cater for all your dancing needs. Students are able to choose the dance they like, select the level at which they are comfortable learning, read the user friendly tutorials and watch professional, easy to understand videos. You can learn to dance online today.

                Should
                Dance Acceleration will cater for all your dancing needs.
                be written as
                Dance Acceleration will cater to all your dancing needs?

                Then again English is not my first language.


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                • ahimsa
                  Major General

                  • Jan 2009
                  • 2184

                  #9
                  Re: Online Dance Studio Website & Cart Review

                  Should
                  Dance Acceleration will cater for all your dancing needs.
                  be written as
                  Dance Acceleration will cater to all your dancing needs?

                  Correct lol
                  Never measure the height of the mountain you're climbing. At the summit, look back and see how small it really is!

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                  • PlayItByBeer
                    Lieutenant Colonel

                    • Mar 2007
                    • 653

                    #10
                    Re: Online Dance Studio Website & Cart Review

                    Thanks for all the spelling & grammar checks.
                    Andrew

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