First time website build... am I right to be happy with it?

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  • devondiver
    Sergeant

    • Feb 2011
    • 25

    First time website build... am I right to be happy with it?

    http://www.scubatechphilippines.com

    First timer.... for my scuba tech phillipines site.. would love any feedback you can spare.

    There is a few pages still under construction, but there shouldn't be any dead links.

    Thanks in advance
    Andy

    ScubaTech Philippines
  • Vasili
    Moderator

    • Mar 2006
    • 14683

    #2
    Re: First time website build... am I right to be happy with it?

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    I would suggest creating some manner of establishing a "page" layout, especially when using black or darker colors as both background and body, if to at least comply with minimal Construct standards .... there simply is not enough for the SE's to distinctly distinguish what constitutes "Main" content from disparate elements and for them to 'read' intentional relationships to disassociated text for any relevance to be emphasized and valued fully: it is not the SE's job to "decipher" artistic design and fill in the blanks when it comes to scoring a build.

    Offering some manner of page margins will overcome this ambiguity for both Visitors (whose initial impression is more likely noticable via the lack of contrasting areas of emphasis, let alone the overly contrasting visuals of Content text and images) and the SE's via the establishment of defined "grouping" and normalcy of textual Content presentation. Like it or not, when text colors are too close to background color (lacking contrast) or are too s harply contrasting (white on black - the opposite of "normal" black on white) they value such in the same manner in which they determine "spoof" sites, "hidden text" (a flag for penalization), or simple "non-conforming" (non-compliant, which triggers closer scrutiny overall).

    Using such page establishment might also help you re-organize some of your smaller elements for better spacing and layout completion .... some things are unbalanced and simply too close for a professional look overall, IMO. (i.e. the smaller icons in top-left header area vs. other areas they could be placed, or in a different, more "flowing" manner).

    Something to think about, using a Page ....

    Otherwise, you seem to have demonstrated a good idea of how to begin establishing navigation, simple META development, and Content development (depth of Content is better than breadth).
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    • Collectors-info
      General

      • Feb 2006
      • 8703

      #3
      Re: Download/recover pages from server hosting?

      Might be a good opportunity to have a revamp of the site. You are using quite a few images that will mean nothing to the SE's without a lot of extra help.IE:http://www.scubatechphilippines.com/images/Finished%20Logo%20v.2%20(sized)_02.jpg is not a good name as not many will enter "Finished%20Logo%20v.2%20(sized)_02" as a search in their browser. Might be a lot better named as scuba-philippines.jpg With an alt tag of Padi scuba diving lessons.
      Also it not good to have text within an image as the SE's cant see this at all. (Sample)
      Your keywords are repeated through out your sites pages & are also not always within the textual content of the pages. IE:

      You are using your Keywords as follows in the body of your page:

      scuba 90 times Good, do nothing (Some se's might think a little excessive)
      diving 35 times Good, do nothing
      philippines 71 times Good, do nothing (Some se's might think a little excessive)
      technical 15 times Good, do nothing
      wreck 8 times Good, do nothing
      holiday 1 time Good, do nothing
      vacation 0 times Add to your web page text
      subic 21 times Good, do nothing
      bay 18 times Good, do nothing
      anilao 7 times Good, do nothing
      batangas 0 times Add to your web page text
      manila 0 times Add to your web page text
      tech 98 times Good, do nothing (Some se's might think a little excessive & also relates to a lot of other things)
      tek 0 times Add to your web page text
      tec 103 times Good, do nothing (Some se's might think a little excessive & also relates to a lot of other things)
      padi 11 times Good, do nothing
      ssi 2 times Good, do nothing
      bsac 0 times Add to your web page text
      course 16 times Good, do nothing
      shop 0 times Add to your web page text
      padi specialty diver philippines 0 times Add to your web page text
      scuba instructor philippines 0 times Add to your web page text
      philippines dive shop 0 times Add to your web page text
      scuba lessons philippines 0 times Add to your web page text
      scuba diving lessons philippines 0 times Add to your web page text
      scuba certification 1 time Good, do nothing
      learn to scuba dive philippines 0 times Add to your web page text
      scuba diving class 0 times Add to your web page text
      scuba diving training 0 times Add to your web page text
      scuba diving shop 0 times Add to your web page text
      master scuba diver 1 time Good, do nothing
      master scuba divers 0 times Add to your web page text
      scuba diving classes 0 times Add to your web page text
      scuba diving certification 0 times Add to your web page text
      certified scuba lessons 0 times Add to your web page text
      certified scuba diving lessons 0 times Add to your web page text
      certified scuba diving training philippines 0 times Add to your web page text
      technical dive courses philippines 0 times Add to your web page text
      technical diving course philippines 0 times Add to your web page text
      what is technical diving 0 times Add to your web page text
      dsat tec program 0 times Add to your web page text
      tec deep 0 times Add to your web page text
      tech deep 1 time Good, do nothing

      Only some idea's if you have to rebuild the site.

      Good luck.
      Regards Chris.

      Collectables, Collecting, collectors-info.com

      www.chrismorris.co.uk

      House build project

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