i was so proud until....

[rayhinton56@btinternet.co]

i was really proud of my first site,http://www.armybarmy.org.then i had a look at some of your sites.
well thank you,ive now got to go back, and see if i can get mine,looking half as good as yours !

[Girlonthehill]

Re: i was so proud until....

i was really proud of my first site,http://www.armybarmy.org.then i had a look at some of your sites.
well thank you,ive now got to go back, and see if i can get mine,looking half as good as yours !

Lol. Don't worry about it, it happens to me all the time. Lol.

You've made an excellent start! I would advise that you consider altering the width to either 1000px or even 800px. Most viewers don't like to have to scroll sideways.

[Bethers]

Re: i was so proud until....

Still be proud, you've got a great start. I do suggest you rethink what your focus is. Before I ever see that you actually are selling your own products, you have a good 1/2 dozen links telling me to go elsewhere to buy from others. I find that you either need to focus on affiliates or on your own sales - but you'll hurt your own if you send them away on your home page. You might want to move those links to a page of their own - again, unless that's where you think you can make revenue.

Great start!

[Dream Lady]

Re: i was so proud until....

I think you are heading in the right direction, but I agree with Bethers in that you need to focus on your products that are for sale, if that is what your intention is. Also I notice on your tackle page, you have some overlapping text and pictures. You may want to clean that up. Great stuff for sale, but hard to navigate through your site. Keep up the good work!

[davidundalicia]

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Yes, Please do move ALL your external links to another pageand perhaps shorten your home page. Draw your clients Into your other pages because
being an ex Royal Engineer, I think you have some great looking products.
(like the armoured cars)
As bethers said, "still be proud". I will pop in again, so see you around....

[SChajin]

Re: i was so proud until....

Hi there,
I agree with all, but does it mean I can buy a tank? I could really use one!

[nick1346]

Re: i was so proud until....

Hi There

That takes me back, "COMPANY WILL FIX BAYONETS.....FIX!.....BAYONETS!!!!!!!!!!"

Great beginings, maybe just resize it. I don't think youre going to have any problems and if anyone else says otherwise roll 'em flat with the 432!
Cheers
Nick

[OhScrap]

Re: i was so proud until....

You have some words way down at the bottom. Under the counter. Are they suppose to be there. I almost missed them. Your site looks good, easy to read, good color combos.

[rayhinton56@btinternet.co]

Re: i was so proud until....

as im out-ranked,ill shut up and stand to attention,your coments are very kind and ive acted on them (and i havent touched my bayonet once )any feedback anytime is very welcome,once again thank you all, Ray