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  • toprakbey
    Staff Sergeant

    • Apr 2006
    • 49

    my first site

    Dear All,

    Pls check my site www.parkeler.com and give mr yr commet.

    thanks much
  • SChajin
    Major General

    • Jan 2006
    • 2792

    #2
    Re: my first site

    Hi,

    It looks great but you might want to check your links. I can't read it but good luck.
    Sharon Chajin

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    • Girlonthehill
      General

      • Oct 2005
      • 4193

      #3
      Re: my first site

      Originally posted by toprakbey
      Dear All,

      Pls check my site www.parkeler.com and give mr yr commet.

      thanks much
      I think you've done really well. There are a couple of things I would give a little extra thought to: I don't think you need to highlight the text, as you have, with the yellow and red - it looks a little untidy; the main photo on you homepage - the quality seems a little off - a little blurred; I found one link that wasn't working (but can't remember its title, sorry). I cannot read the language you have built your site so can not offer any spelling or grammar advice, lol.

      Very well done and, I think, with a few little tweeks it will be beautiful!

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      • rcmaddawg
        Sergeant First Class

        • Apr 2006
        • 57

        #4
        Re: my first site

        I have to agree with Girlonthehill, I found that the last three links didn't work, your email one and the two above that. But your colors are nice and not jumping out in my face. As I know with my site, every bit of advice from people in here is a great help. Good luck, and job well done.
        Rcmaddawg
        www.rcfun4all.com

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        • oryan
          Members

          • Jun 2005
          • 9

          #5
          Re: my first site

          Hi

          The site has a clean look to it, however some of the links don't work. Good luck! I'm sure as you go along the site will look very good.

          Michellene

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          • OhScrap
            First Lieutenant

            • Apr 2006
            • 160

            #6
            Re: my first site

            Site looks great nice colors. Just curious what is the site about and what language? The only thing I would add would be a end to the page. I call it a copyright bar ... basically a line at the bottom that tells our brain/fingers to stop.
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            Shelly

            www.ohs****sagleidaho.com

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            • jahnsele
              First Lieutenant

              • Apr 2006
              • 185

              #7
              Re: my first site

              I don't understand the language but your E-mail form is not working properlly. It gives me an error once I "Gonder"

              Try ro chake you color layouts.

              All the best!
              jahnSELE

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              • Bethers
                Major General & Forum Moderator

                • Feb 2006
                • 5224

                #8
                Re: my first site

                I could tell what the site is about by the pictures - and they are great pics - but you should add the alt tags to them.

                Same as the others about the links.

                I'm not real fond of the choice you made for the scroll over on your menu - as that blue doesn't really fit your sites colors.

                Tweaking a bit and you'll have it in great shape.
                Beth
                A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

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                • Dream Lady
                  Major General

                  • Feb 2006
                  • 2036

                  #9
                  Re: my first site

                  My kind of site!!! Flooring, Yippee. Looks good, but I do agree with the others comments. Also need to title your pages in the browser bar. Love all the pictures of the wood floors. Good Luck! P.S. What language is it? Just Curious.
                  Cindy
                  Cindy Smentowski

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                  • toprakbey
                    Staff Sergeant

                    • Apr 2006
                    • 49

                    #10
                    Re: my first site

                    Hey thanks much all of you, You all make me happy,it is realy nice to hear something for what you done , it is positive or negative, My site langauge is Turkish, my English is not so good therefore for give me for some mistake during writing pls.

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                    • Bethers
                      Major General & Forum Moderator

                      • Feb 2006
                      • 5224

                      #11
                      Re: my first site

                      Your English is WAY better than my Turkish would be - as I would probably be in trouble if I tried to nod a hello :)
                      Beth
                      A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

                      SEO and Marketing Tools
                      SEO - The Basics

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                      • OhScrap
                        First Lieutenant

                        • Apr 2006
                        • 160

                        #12
                        Re: my first site

                        Originally posted by Bethers
                        Your English is WAY better than my Turkish would be - as I would probably be in trouble if I tried to nod a hello :)
                        Isn't it fun all the culture that BV exposes us to.
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                        Shelly

                        www.ohs****sagleidaho.com

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