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  • ash.whitehair
    Sergeant Major

    • May 2006
    • 94

    Check out my new & improved site

    This is my new site, dont know if you'll remember the last one I posted but it didn't display properly. I have changed it completly. Please let me know of any broken links etc.

    Thanks in advance

    A.whitehair

    www.timbershotel.co.uk
    Ash Whitehair
  • Girlonthehill
    General

    • Oct 2005
    • 4193

    #2
    Re: Check out my new & improved site

    Hi Ash!

    I like the overall look of your design. It's very elegant yet contemporary. I like the way the site works and all the links I tried worked although I realise there are some unfinished areas.

    The only thing I strugled with really was your title. The elegant script you have used is a little blurred and difficult to make out. This sometimes happens when it's saved as a gif or jpg. Apart from that tiny pick, I think it's lovely and you have done a great job.

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    • gueorgui
      Major

      • Dec 2005
      • 293

      #3
      Re: Check out my new & improved site

      Hi Ash,

      yes, professional site, extremely easy to navigate, loads fast and is well layed out.

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      • Aliens Anonymous
        Special Status

        • Jan 2006
        • 1144

        #4
        Re: Check out my new & improved site

        HI ash.whitehair
        is it me or are peolpe getting better at this,
        very professional looking site have you done this before.
        must agree with Amanda i could not make out the small text on the header.

        four stars for you go to the front of the class.

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        • allstarfaces
          Brigadier General

          • Apr 2006
          • 1665

          #5
          Re: Check out my new & improved site

          i must say and beleive me if i didnt like it i would say but i think thisi s absolutely brilliant i love the way it is designed good work and when you get fed up serving that lovely food webdesighn is for you , agree with mand tho but hey we can find soemthing in everything even laff laff my site ha ha maybe not
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          • Bethers
            Major General & Forum Moderator

            • Feb 2006
            • 5224

            #6
            Re: Check out my new & improved site

            Well, I think it looks good - and hate to give any negative - but I didn't think your links worked - when the words across the top all run together - first I didn't think they were links. Then when I took my mouse over them and they didn't do anything to let me know they were links, I didn't try to click on them. You've taken away all the options that let the normal user know that something is a link - and I think by doing so - you'll not get as many people to interior pages.

            I notice you kept the standard method for your "click to enlarge" - including the underline and the hand appearing. I really recommend you separate your links on the top of the pages - think about using | - and that you do something to make them look like links again.

            The site looks great!!!
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            • SChajin
              Major General

              • Jan 2006
              • 2792

              #7
              Re: Check out my new & improved site

              Everything worked well for me, It looks great
              Sharon Chajin

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              • ash.whitehair
                Sergeant Major

                • May 2006
                • 94

                #8
                Re: Check out my new & improved site

                Hello everyone, thank you for all your comments, I really do appricate it - please please please keep them coming...any advise on how I can make the logo appear clearer? On my laptop its perfect, but I just viewed it on a 17" monitor and I completly agree that it blends in with the background. What if I saved it as different file?

                Vodahost any comments on my site?
                Ash Whitehair

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                • Andy128
                  Major General

                  • Dec 2005
                  • 2317

                  #9
                  Re: Check out my new & improved site

                  whitehair,

                  I think it is a very nice site. You have put a lot of work into it and it shows. I agree with Bethers about the menu links. Try putting a hyphen after each link title. That will help space it out a little and not let it run to gether. Don't put a hyphen after the last one though. Just a thought.

                  Other than that- it really looks great.
                  PHP- is a blast!

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                  • circuspet.com
                    Brigadier General

                    • Feb 2006
                    • 1104

                    #10
                    Re: Check out my new & improved site

                    although I found my way home using your site map, I would like to see home links to your index. your menu made me hungry

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                    • brooksman
                      Sergeant Major

                      • Jun 2006
                      • 88

                      #11
                      Re: Check out my new & improved site

                      Great website. I think it is really good; and could be great

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