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  • tgwoodske
    Sergeant

    • Feb 2006
    • 28

    My Rocky Mountain Utopia

    Welcome to my site, it has links to many sites of interest from sports interaction, shopping online, health & fittness info to travel prices and vacation planning. Visit 'www.myrmu.com' for all your needs.
  • Girlonthehill
    General

    • Oct 2005
    • 4193

    #2
    Re: My Rocky Mountain Utopia

    Originally posted by tgwoodske
    Welcome to my site, it has links to many sites of interest from sports interaction, shopping online, health & fittness info to travel prices and vacation planning. Visit 'www.myrmu.com' for all your needs.
    Well.... I'm sorry but I have to be brutally honest with you here.... I loved the picture at the top and though 'ooh, this looks good' then the rest loaded and I though 'oh, how disappointing'. There is nothing on your site to make me want to stay and have a look around. If you seriously want people to visit your site and click on some of your affiliate links then you have to provide something of interest. Some articles about the area, pictures of places to go and things to see. Also a page choc-a-block full of banner ads is not a good thing, as I have learned. There is no order, no logic that is apparent. If you need to do this on your home page then I think you need to have a little order in there. It's a headache at the moment.

    I apologise if you think this sounds harsh but my aim is to be honest in order that you can actually make your website attract visitirs and make you some money. It won't do either in it's current format, I fear. You've done a good job learning how to use BV - and have the basics of a good site - you just need to put in a little more thought and work and you could have a money-spinning masterpiece.

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    • Dream Lady
      Major General

      • Feb 2006
      • 2036

      #3
      Re: My Rocky Mountain Utopia

      I very much agree with Amanda. You also need to check your spelling. Good Luck
      Cindy
      Cindy Smentowski

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      • Andy128
        Major General

        • Dec 2005
        • 2317

        #4
        Re: My Rocky Mountain Utopia

        Don't be discouraged. Your mastery of BV web builder is evident and a great accomplishment. Your site just needs a little organizing.

        many sites of interest from sports interaction, shopping online, health & fittness info to travel prices and vacation planning.
        But it is all mixed together. You will find that web surfers are not patient people. If it is not right there and easy to locate- they will move on.
        Maybe try a web page for each subject?

        Anyway- keep encouraged and have fun.

        Andy
        PHP- is a blast!

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        • davidundalicia
          General

          • Mar 2006
          • 6294

          #5
          Re: My Rocky Mountain Utopia

          Andy´s suggestion of a seperate web page for each subject is a sound one as at the moment S.E´s will take this site as being a Link Farm.

          Amanda and Cindy have been their usual honest selves and I would listen and learn from thier candid opinions.

          Thats what these forums are all about, look, listen and Learn.

          You have the basics for a very good site......keep going.

          Have fun
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          Regards..... David

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          • Lincslady
            Brigadier General

            • Jan 2006
            • 1397

            #6
            Re: My Rocky Mountain Utopia

            Hi tg,

            I agree with all the above comments, the picture at the top of your site is beautiful and a nice opening to your site, but your site needs organising better, it looks a little messy right now.

            Maybe navigation buttons down the left side, there are nicer looking buttons about, than the ones you have, which will enhance the look of your site, then like someone said a separate page for each of your subjects ..the main one being the rocky mountains iI would have loved to have seen info about the area and pics on that , then you can have your banners/ads relating to that subject.

            Also you need to set your page widths before you do anything else as you have a big sideways scroll on each page ..very off putting to most people ...to fix this click on the link below.

            Hope this helps you ...you will get there :o)
            Click the link below for page guidelines (no more sideways scroll)

            http://www.vodahost.com/vodatalk/sho...eferrerid=5490

            How to Center your page
            http://www.vodahost.com/vodatalk/blu...tml#post124746




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            • tomgodfrey18
              Staff Sergeant

              • May 2006
              • 43

              #7
              Re: My Rocky Mountain Utopia

              i can't even get it to load? everything else is working fine, so i think my computer is okay.

              Sorry
              Tom

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              your local directory, for Burton on Trent

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              • Lincslady
                Brigadier General

                • Jan 2006
                • 1397

                #8
                Re: My Rocky Mountain Utopia

                What cant you get to load? my link? ......if so just go to the Bluevoda Tricks n Tips forum and scroll down to page guide settings
                Click the link below for page guidelines (no more sideways scroll)

                http://www.vodahost.com/vodatalk/sho...eferrerid=5490

                How to Center your page
                http://www.vodahost.com/vodatalk/blu...tml#post124746




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                • tomgodfrey18
                  Staff Sergeant

                  • May 2006
                  • 43

                  #9
                  Re: My Rocky Mountain Utopia

                  sorry lincslady, i mean i cant The Utopia site to open at all, not if you all can it must be my PC or broadband connection, god bless British Telecom,
                  Sorry to have confused
                  Tom

                  http://www.gfc-local.com
                  your local directory, for Burton on Trent

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