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  • circuspet.com
    Brigadier General

    • Feb 2006
    • 1104

    Please critique my site

    I couldn't understand why I was not getting responce on my last posting, asking members to critique my site-dah maybe it's because I left my email instead of my web address. I take back all those wicked thoughts, I seem to be doing that alot -dah http://www.CircusPet.com
  • Marc Sanders
    Second Lieutenant

    • Mar 2006
    • 103

    #2
    Re: Please critique my site

    well, it's different. I can see you are still working on it as there are some broken links. The cyan you have chosen for a backdrop is a little in your face. information is cool and tells you exactly what to do and expect.

    I think personally, centering in the browser will make this site work a lot better..
    Marc Sanders

    Currently working on: www.fakeitbikinistore.co.uk
    Messenger: tealc_of_chulak********.com

    My philosophy: keep your friends close, enemies closer.....!

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    • bill2006
      Lieutenant General

      • May 2006
      • 3421

      #3
      Re: Please critique my site

      Hi Circuspet,
      Agree with MS, pages should be centered, you can do this from page properties and clicking 'center in browser'

      The "tricks" link does not work.

      Bill
      Bill
      www.blueearthtea.com
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      www.theemeraldbay.com

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      • Bethers
        Major General & Forum Moderator

        • Feb 2006
        • 5224

        #4
        Re: Please critique my site

        First thing I noticed were obvious mis-spellings. You need to get those corrected ASAP. - FYI - it starts in your header - it should say the Circus is coming - one m.
        Beth
        A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

        SEO and Marketing Tools
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        • SChajin
          Major General

          • Jan 2006
          • 2792

          #5
          Re: Please critique my site

          You should have a lot of fun with your site, just a little more work.
          Sharon Chajin

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          • circuspet.com
            Brigadier General

            • Feb 2006
            • 1104

            #6
            Re: Please critique my site

            Thanks all espically Mark for starting the whipping. I think your right about the loud background, Yes, Bethers I do have spell check, Danial webster is the centre of american english. lol And Bill the only thing I hate more than being wrong is for someone else to be right. Thanks for the tip
            P.S. the Circus pet-Tricks video gallery and the Pet star-Starpet photo registration gallery may need a seperate domain. ko os m'i lexdistic
            love life, enjoy every thing you do, and when you need a laugh look in the mirror

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            • circuspet.com
              Brigadier General

              • Feb 2006
              • 1104

              #7
              Re: Please critique my site

              no wonder I'm still a grunt I could have made 5 postings out of that last one. Naw, I'm not that com(pet)itive

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              • circuspet.com
                Brigadier General

                • Feb 2006
                • 1104

                #8
                Re: Please critique my site

                Marc Sanders:
                I have toned down the background color(maybe too much) and it easier on the eyes, however now the logo looks too loud. Don't you think so?
                I have seen your site and think you have a great eye for color

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                • brooksman
                  Sergeant Major

                  • Jun 2006
                  • 88

                  #9
                  Re: Please critique my site

                  I think that your website is pretty good. The only thing that i seen wrong was some errors in the spelling. Other than that good website

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                  • circuspet.com
                    Brigadier General

                    • Feb 2006
                    • 1104

                    #10
                    Re: Please critique my site

                    Oh well! I s****ed the logo and think I will try an animated logo maybe just waving banners. would like to see how that effects the load time.
                    I made sure to record the custom color specs so I can duplicate the background on the new logo. Here goes check back tomorrow please

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                    • narobe
                      First Lieutenant

                      • Apr 2006
                      • 182

                      #11
                      Re: Please critique my site

                      Hello,
                      Its nice the only thing is:
                      On my screen I don't see your page centered it's on the left, and the about us page also is a bit to low on my screen I have to scroll to see it, would gain a lot if it was all centered, my sreen is 1024

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                      • Marc Sanders
                        Second Lieutenant

                        • Mar 2006
                        • 103

                        #12
                        Re: Please critique my site

                        excellent - colour is much better. now all you need to do is add fun to the homepage...party hats, streamers, maybe a big top...something that makes me want to look around the site....

                        first impressions count, and will keep interest...
                        I look forward to seeing what happens next

                        Marc Sanders
                        Marc Sanders

                        Currently working on: www.fakeitbikinistore.co.uk
                        Messenger: tealc_of_chulak********.com

                        My philosophy: keep your friends close, enemies closer.....!

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                        • circuspet.com
                          Brigadier General

                          • Feb 2006
                          • 1104

                          #13
                          Re: Please critique my site

                          Self evaluation does not work well with med my ego. NAROBE: I thought by putting every thing to the lefi I was eliminating the side scroll, which I hate. It accully views in the center (that's american for centre) of my screen and prints well too. Perhaps I should change my screen settings instead?
                          Marc: After changing the background color, the logo clashed so I s****ed it. I really like the big top Idea. I think Ill start working on a logo with that theme.
                          thank you all so much espically Marc
                          P.S. I found a lost puppy>http://www.circuspet.com what do you think?

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                          • Marc Sanders
                            Second Lieutenant

                            • Mar 2006
                            • 103

                            #14
                            Re: Please critique my site

                            Love it - very good, gives a little sense of interest. Something that de-commer******es your page and makes it stand out from the rest..

                            Keep going my friend - strength to strength!
                            Marc Sanders

                            Currently working on: www.fakeitbikinistore.co.uk
                            Messenger: tealc_of_chulak********.com

                            My philosophy: keep your friends close, enemies closer.....!

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                            • circuspet.com
                              Brigadier General

                              • Feb 2006
                              • 1104

                              #15
                              Re: Please critique my site

                              I hope everyone will be drawn to the low key, soft sell, non-comercial
                              aspect. Hoping that difference will be a breath of fresh air. Everyone can't be on meth. lol Your critiques in the past have really helped. Can you tell me please what you don't like.

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