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  • Theopod
    First Sergeant

    • Mar 2006
    • 76

    Still tweaking, but check it out!

    Much more content to add and many more hours of work to do, but check it out and give me the nitty gritty!


    Many thanks, Theopod
  • Jeremy
    Brigadier General

    • Apr 2006
    • 1502

    #2
    Re: Still tweaking, but check it out!

    WOW! Hehe, talk about FLASHY! lol .. good site, might want to put less information on the index page - well alot of information is good, but I find you have everything cramped together so it's a little confusing for me.
    Best regards,
    Jeremy

    www.cornwall4rent.com

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    • Lorna
      Master Sergeant

      • Jul 2006
      • 63

      #3
      Re: Still tweaking, but check it out!

      Hi, I'm relatively new to this web building game - however, your front page is very striking. Just one thing - there's an awful lot to read - there are no spaces between sentences - there should be three!. It would also help if it was split into paragraphs. It needed a lot of concetration to read it.
      I've got nowhere near your standard - haven't got any 'moving parts, so I realise that it's a great effort. Must learn to play poker!!
      Just my opinion!:>)
      Cheers
      Lorna

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      • choco777
        Brigadier General

        • Apr 2006
        • 1526

        #4
        Re: Still tweaking, but check it out!

        Wow alot of spritz and sparkle. Some alignment problems with text. The eyeballs were a little distracting, to say the least. All the links I tried were working fine. The color is not my preference, kind of difficult to read the yellow(?) on black but thats fine. The black background is fine but like you say you are still tweaking. Good job and alot of work so far. Some nice art work. Good luck. It will be interesting to follow your progress.
        Choco777
        www.mayatabasco.com


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        • SChajin
          Major General

          • Jan 2006
          • 2792

          #5
          Re: Still tweaking, but check it out!

          I agree with the above a lot of info, I found it very cute thought...Good job
          Sharon Chajin

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          • bill2006
            Lieutenant General

            • May 2006
            • 3421

            #6
            Re: Still tweaking, but check it out!

            Lot of work.
            Bill
            www.blueearthtea.com
            www.ftaaconsulting.com
            www.iaval.com
            www.theemeraldbay.com

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            • islandcrazy
              Major

              • Jul 2006
              • 286

              #7
              Re: Still tweaking, but check it out!

              Oh my goodness! What a great job! I LOVE the little guy in your logo! I think your colors and arrangement will really be attractive to this kind of site...reminds me of Las Vegas (in a good way) and all the colors and movement and "wild stuff" you see when walking through a casino or along the main strip there!

              It is alot to read though, and I did not want to take the time to wade through all the text...but I am lazy. Perhaps if you broke it into smaller paragraphs it would be more inviting to someone who never visited a site like this but wants to give it a try!

              Good job!
              still working on website!

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              • mark89
                Sergeant

                • May 2006
                • 35

                #8
                Re: Still tweaking, but check it out!

                Wow you have done a great job good chose of colors.
                Thank you
                Maggie's Enterprise
                Maggie's Gift Shop

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                • Theopod
                  First Sergeant

                  • Mar 2006
                  • 76

                  #9
                  Re: Still tweaking, but check it out!

                  LOL, thanks for all your input and yes it may be a little too flashy and i have been trying to tone it down a notch. As far as the text goes you are probably right that people won't want to wade through it all. I'll have to work on that too.

                  Many Thanks, Theopod.

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                  • islandcrazy
                    Major

                    • Jul 2006
                    • 286

                    #10
                    Re: Still tweaking, but check it out!

                    I Love it flashy!! Makes me want to join in the fun!!!
                    still working on website!

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                    • Theopod
                      First Sergeant

                      • Mar 2006
                      • 76

                      #11
                      Re: Still tweaking, but check it out!

                      LOL, yes it may be too flashy and i am trying to tone it down a tad. As far as the text goes, you're probably right that people won't want to muddle through it, but i also like the Las Vegas comment. I think your onto something there!!! Thanks for all your comments.

                      Theopod.

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