I decided I didn't like my first attempt so I did a makeover on www.healthy-4-less.com and would like everyone's opinion. The only thing I cannot get as I want are the videos. They work just fine but I want a picture on the screens until someone clicks a button to start. I've tried bringing the pictures front, putting the video back but all I get is a black screen. Any help would be appreciated. And constructive criticism, of course.
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I like it, it's great, design illustrations, that's perfect for such industry, but small comment, that illustration on the top which is in gray, you better change it to green as well, a multiply dark green in photoshop will work, because your main color is green in the website, so keep constency (that's how you spell it - constency?), anyway because the gray shows a difference which attract the eye to it which you don't need, you need to attract your visitors to the content.
Allright, can I ask you for a favor or tip? how did you do that animation with beth owen and ameriplan logo?
Thanks, and good jobThe Producer
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Jobo,
Nice job.
-Ditto Circus' comments on centering.
-The menu on top "Home...Fun Links" has no working links. You have working links on the bottom menu only. Consider fixing this.
-Bus. opportunity link loaded slooooow, and I am on broadband, could be the videos.
-Your page is titled 'index' really not the best word for search engines to find you. Title your pages to describe each page.
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bill2006:
I too am having a problem with my title " THE CIRCUS IS COMING ". If you can think of a more pertenant title for search engines drop me a clue. I look forward to re writing my scripts (like going to the dentist).
....NO I can't get tickets too the circus,,,LOL
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I really like your site ...good colors and texting but I also have to echo bac kthe comments by circuspet and the others... I think once those are weaked it will be great. Good luck and looking forward to going back and look at it in leisure.
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I am not much of an expert, but your site looks great.. it's professional and well set.
I like repeating the menu at the bottom of the page.. One thing though, can you add the 'Hand' Mouse Cursor when it points on those menus..!!
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Originally posted by circuspet.comjobo1953:
Although I personally don't like to side scroll, your site works well and looks very profeshional. You do, however, have some overlaping text on the top left of you home page.
I know what you mean about the side scroll. I'm not much of a fan of it either but any other way just looks squashed. May work on that at some point.
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Originally posted by Nite ProducerI like it, it's great, design illustrations, that's perfect for such industry, but small comment, that illustration on the top which is in gray, you better change it to green as well, a multiply dark green in photoshop will work, because your main color is green in the website, so keep constency (that's how you spell it - constency?), anyway because the gray shows a difference which attract the eye to it which you don't need, you need to attract your visitors to the content.
Allright, can I ask you for a favor or tip? how did you do that animation with beth owen and ameriplan logo?
Thanks, and good job
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Originally posted by bill2006Jobo,
Nice job.
-Ditto Circus' comments on centering.
-The menu on top "Home...Fun Links" has no working links. You have working links on the bottom menu only. Consider fixing this.
-Bus. opportunity link loaded slooooow, and I am on broadband, could be the videos.
-Your page is titled 'index' really not the best word for search engines to find you. Title your pages to describe each page.
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Originally posted by ez-ezI am not much of an expert, but your site looks great.. it's professional and well set.
I like repeating the menu at the bottom of the page.. One thing though, can you add the 'Hand' Mouse Cursor when it points on those menus..!!
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Its graet and very cool
Colours are very nice
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Originally posted by circuspet.comJobo1953:
Sometimes things look different on different browsers, I'm on IE, do both your puters use same browser?
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