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  • Liwendyll
    Sergeant

    • Aug 2006
    • 24

    #16
    Re: Thoughts suggestions

    Okay one last critique for the nite would be greatly appreciated. What ya think now?

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    • Vasili
      Moderator

      • Mar 2006
      • 14683

      #17
      Re: Thoughts suggestions

      Velly cool!

      (Just tweak the top left box lines -above menu- to align...)
      > Ever think about using verdana as a font? Personally, I think it would be a better "match" to your site, and be more legible than the TimesRoman...

      Soright? Soright! Nite.

      Will pop in on you whenever....
      . VodaWebs....Luxury Group
      * Success Is Potential Realized *

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      • MickiRenee
        Corporal

        • Aug 2006
        • 11

        #18
        Re: Thoughts suggestions

        Well, it looks great to me! I was impressed with your color and style at the top. I read somewhere that italics can be hard to read when there is a lot of it, but it looked nice on your page. Good luck with your site!

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        • Liwendyll
          Sergeant

          • Aug 2006
          • 24

          #19
          Re: Thoughts suggestions

          Yes the Verdana is awesome I like that very much thanks for the suggestion updating pages Ill be posting again in a day or two for another critique. Thanks so much for the help.

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          • islandcrazy
            Major

            • Jul 2006
            • 286

            #20
            Re: Thoughts suggestions

            Well, RATS, I can't see your last edit, but the first two are WONDERFUL! I love that header and I love the robot. I love the colors you chose and the menu buttons. Clean, crisp, "techno". YOur business concept is very interesting, too.

            I think your layout matches your "theme" and content and the nature of your business PERFECTLY (well, as close to as you can I suppose!) I like the size of the large header (the first ones as I don't know if you resized it later). It balances out the huge amount of text. I'm a lazy reader I guess and i need pictures!!! LOL

            Great start and good luck on your adventure!!!
            still working on website!

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            • helganog
              Master Sergeant

              • Jul 2006
              • 67

              #21
              Re: Thoughts suggestions

              What a brilliant looking site. Really simple but dead effective! Love the 'bot and the header on the main page looks really effective.
              Just to confuse things I think the menu bar looks better hard up against the left margin. I'm not sure if this has changed as a result of centering - a bit past my newbie skills I'm afraid. I also think that the text on the main page is a bit small.
              On the "About" page I would suggest you try to break the paragraphs up a bit smaller as it looks a bit daunting!
              Other than that - congratulations...I'm jealous.
              Helga

              www.compasslandscapes.com

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              • bill2006
                Lieutenant General

                • May 2006
                • 3421

                #22
                Re: Thoughts suggestions

                Much better, good work.
                Changing the caps really helped too.
                Is your page saved as http://www.virtuallaborforce.net/index.html or as http://www.virtuallaborforce.net . Reason I ask is that the address bar shows the former.
                Bill
                www.blueearthtea.com
                www.ftaaconsulting.com
                www.iaval.com
                www.theemeraldbay.com

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                • Liwendyll
                  Sergeant

                  • Aug 2006
                  • 24

                  #23
                  Re: Thoughts suggestions

                  it is saved as index.html not sure why its showing up as just www.virtuallaborforce.net when ya first go there if ya click a link it shows as index.html is there a difference?

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                  • Liwendyll
                    Sergeant

                    • Aug 2006
                    • 24

                    #24
                    Re: Thoughts suggestions

                    Heh and not sure what part ya saw but my most recent effort is with the buttons along the top and different header I thought it looked much more presentable and less cluttered looking that way dont ya think? The only last detail was if ya notice on the terms page at the bottom I put the links and copyright on the graphic as apposed to underneath it like the other pages

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                    • bill2006
                      Lieutenant General

                      • May 2006
                      • 3421

                      #25
                      Re: Thoughts suggestions

                      Looks good, I had not seen the menu on top.
                      Bill
                      www.blueearthtea.com
                      www.ftaaconsulting.com
                      www.iaval.com
                      www.theemeraldbay.com

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