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  • antiego
    Private First Class

    • Jan 2009
    • 6

    First website>> Please critique

    Please rip my site to shreds!
    I need this site to be perfect.

    (just for fun)
    if you don't mind being a potential customer for a moment what do you think of my services? Would you want an estimate from us?

    Thank you for your time. http:http://www.seequality.com
  • davidundalicia
    General

    • Mar 2006
    • 6294

    #2
    Re: First website>> Please critique

    your link is pointing to contact.html
    and that submit button is not working

    Your contact.php page works, but is missing the success page.....404 error.

    The industrial link on your contact page was not working......
    Have fun
    Regards..... David

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    • antiego
      Private First Class

      • Jan 2009
      • 6

      #3
      Re: First website>> Please critique

      Thank you so very much.
      Yes these things I'm attempting to work these out but my brain is slow.

      What do you think of the actual look of my site?

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      • Marincky
        General

        • Apr 2006
        • 4539

        #4
        Re: First website>> Please critique

        I'll give you a review in ten minutes when your site finally downloads!!!!
        Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

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        • antiego
          Private First Class

          • Jan 2009
          • 6

          #5
          Re: First website>> Please critique

          Why is it so slow to down load?

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          • Marincky
            General

            • Apr 2006
            • 4539

            #6
            Re: First website>> Please critique

            well, put it this way... I've given up already sorry.
            Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

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            • antiego
              Private First Class

              • Jan 2009
              • 6

              #7
              Re: First website>> Please critique

              Thank for your time anyways.

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              • Marincky
                General

                • Apr 2006
                • 4539

                #8
                Re: First website>> Please critique

                I'm kidding ya.. I'm looking but it's slow going... give me ten
                Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

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                • Marincky
                  General

                  • Apr 2006
                  • 4539

                  #9
                  Re: First website>> Please critique

                  Ok,

                  First glance.

                  Too slow to load on all pages, you need to look at this.

                  Site needs centering in the middle of the screen

                  On the home page, under each section you have a lot of underlined
                  words. Underlined words to your average internet user screams out 'CLICK ON ME' However, these are not links, so remove the underlineing on all of these to save disappointment and confusion.

                  Site has too many images and not enough text. If I was considering using you I would want more details than pictures.

                  You don't have to show me your awards on every page.... I get the picture... remove the awards and replace with some good quality info that makes me say 'god i must call these guys now'!

                  Great.. I think I'll give you a call... oh no wait.... where are you... UK, USA, Japan, France, Mars ??????

                  You are one site out of 600 billion and growing...... maximise the chance of people finding you on Google by placing your address on the website, and what areas you cover. There's no point in me calling you now is there? so remove the chance of me seeing your website on the net and increase it for those in your street, town, state, country.

                  You've put a lot of hard work in I can see that, but just rethink on these issues and you will improve drastically.

                  Oh and don't forget to do your META data!

                  Best of luck
                  Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

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                  • antiego
                    Private First Class

                    • Jan 2009
                    • 6

                    #10
                    Re: First website>> Please critique

                    You have bee very helpful, and I will change everything you suggested.

                    Whats META data?

                    Oh, San Francisco Bay Area.
                    Thanks again for your time!!!

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                    • Marincky
                      General

                      • Apr 2006
                      • 4539

                      #11
                      Re: First website>> Please critique

                      Page titles
                      keywords
                      page descriptions

                      go into page properties, you will find all the fields in there. But read up very carefully on how to optimise your website. Don't just put anything in there.
                      Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

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                      • antiego
                        Private First Class

                        • Jan 2009
                        • 6

                        #12
                        Re: First website>> Please critique

                        Looks like i might need your paid expertise sometime in the near future.
                        Thanks for all your help.

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                        • poogle
                          Private

                          • Feb 2009
                          • 1

                          #13
                          Re: First website>> Please critique

                          I thought your roll over images of the before and after were excellent

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                          • Collectors-info
                            General

                            • Feb 2006
                            • 8703

                            #14
                            Re: First website>> Please critique

                            Hi, the front page is very slow at well over 2000kb & should be looking nearer the 200kb in total. Its mainly down to images.
                            If your using the image swap/mouse over, the 2 images want to be exactly the same size in W&H to save distortion.
                            Regards Chris.

                            Collectables, Collecting, collectors-info.com

                            www.chrismorris.co.uk

                            House build project

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