Please check my web site and comment

[Jan Wilkens]

Hi Guys,

Please feel free to critisize/comment (backed up with suggestions) on my web pages(s) www.fandjbics.com . I still think it needs more info such as an identification at the bottom of the page, date and time etc. I am new at this and cannot create this on my own.

[davidundalicia]

Re: Please check my web site and comment

Good use of photos.......link to gallery not working from your about us page.

Need a little work as shown below (just a guide)

Title relevancy to page content is excellent.
The Title relevancy to page content is 100%.

Description: Description meta tag relevancy to page content is fair.
The Description meta tag relevancy to page content is 44%.

Keywords: Keywords meta tag relevancy to page content is fair.
The keywords meta tag relevancy to page content is 67%.

Its looking good, just needs a little more work..........so do all MY websites...lol

[Sunchaser]

Re: Please check my web site and comment

Hi

You've done a good job in getting everything there on your pages that you have.

Your elements on your pages have not been lined up - for help with this you can go to Layout/Guide settings - and use the grid. This will help you to line everything up nicely.

It would be a good idea to have some more pages - at least a separate page each for kitchens, bathrooms, bedrooms etc.

On a personal level, when I look at a site like this, I think it's nice to an immediate visual represention of your business. Using the ad-banner rotator, with the best photos of your kitchens & bathrooms etc - nice and large and 'above the fold' on your homepage - would look lovely.
But that's just my personal taste!

If you have any customers testimonials - these are good to include.

It would be a good idea to have your location listed on your pages, and more information about your services. What you have written so far is good - it's well written but you just need to expand this out.
You will also need good title tags, and be sure to name your pages well.

All of this helps you to be found through search engines.

You have some work to do overall - goodluck with it!

[jkadin]

Re: Please check my web site and comment

Job well done the only thing that I could come up with try to keep your pages uniformed by staying in the same window. Other than that job well done.